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And that's the end of the chapter ( ' v ' )

I have the feeling this part is going to bring me drama in Webtoon. Not because of what Yule does to Axel, but because he says "Ragnar's mine" and he shows possessiveness. When I write my characters they always speak to me what they would say or how they feel, and when I was writing that part, Yule was in possessive mode because he has finally found a home, a man that treats him kindly... And Axel is threatening all that, so it put him in alert mode, in "I must protect what I have" mode. Problem is many Webtoon readers expect main characters to be little rays of sunshine with 0% defects, so I'm pretty sure some people are going to be mad at that sentence 😂 I did consider changing it to avoid any possible drama, but then the result would not be "what Yule would say", I'd feel like forcing Yule to be a character he isn't.

Of course Yule is not possessive to the point he'd disregard Ragnar's feelings. If Ragnar didn't want him anymore he'd accept that. But currently it's clear to him that Ragnar does want him, so he feels the right to claim Ragnar as his.

Maybe I'm overthinking, maybe readers won't be offended. It's just I've seen so much drama over literally nothing in fiction that I'm scared someday that bomb will explode on me 😂 But I still choose to write my characters however I want because otherwise there would be no point in writing stories.

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Yuna

That slap was satisfying. But Yule's look in the last panel makes me sad 😢

Colette Miller

Axel being upset when yule said put your money where your mouth ( and my fist) is 😂😂😂

Sarah-chan

If someone on webtoon says anything mean I will teach them a lesson. I'll protect your babies. Just Kidding. I won't throw hands. I'm to soft for that.

Cas

Finally get the rat out of here

Rachel

Aww Yule. That last expression 🥺 But I love the little plushies. In regards to the possessive thing, I think it makes sense. Axel was getting a little too clingy and Yule was putting his foot down.

Heather Faulkner

I am proud of Yule for standing up for himself and Axel. But I know he is going have a hard time afterwards.

Heather Faulkner

Yule may have said that Axel was his, but I don’t think that is an issue. He was in a heated moment, and in all honesty, I don’t think he is wrong. Axel is his, as in his boyfriend. Yule doesn’t exhibit any troubling possessive behavior. If he acted possessive frequently, then that would be an issue.

Neko Rina

Tú deja que tus niños nos cuenten la historia como ellos la sienten, que pare eso son tuyos! Lectores estúpidos los habrá siempre, pero en el fondo, esa gente no es el público que te conviene. Y si como bien dices, se agarran a cualquier detalle tonto para montar drama, lo mismo pasan de esa frase y se fijan en otra tontería xD Also, el gatito no tendrá garras, pero una buena mano abierta también hace mucha pupa! Jejeje 😎

Amy Cargos-Morowitz

The webtoons community is a weird one, don’t take their words too seriously. At least your patrons love you no matter what. 🩷💕 *le sigh* If only Yule had his claws, then he could leave some scars on Axel’s face as a reminder of what happened; like comeuppance for what he did to Ragnar. Oh well, this is good, too.😈

Urchin

That slap made me happy. ❤️😁

JustHally

That slaaaaap! I also love the expressions at the end, Yule just realised what he did and Ragnar in utter shock! 😱 THE DRAMA of this chapter 🫨

VelBelle

The characters and their reactions feel real. Do what feels right because you know these characters more than we do ❤️ But poor Yule, he’s going to feel so guilty, or feel like he’s becoming like Owen 😭

Scarlett

Yule is probably going to feel so bad! But I'm kinda happy, he did what we all were thinking. 😂

HoneyB

I really hope Axel doesn’t run to Lars and now Lars is angry with Yule… but that’s probably what’s going to happen. He did it before, he’ll do it again.

Bella

I love that you kept the story and their words to be the way you feel the characters would express themselves! It all makes sense so while I hope no drama arises on any platform because of it, you made the right choice as an author!! 💕also omg the DRAMA🫢 it’s such a messy situation so poor Yule must feel shocked that he slapped him but Axel DID provoke him and we know Ragnar will be there for his man✨also I don’t feel bad at all that Axel is tearing up, he needs to feel bad and reflect on his actions😌

AnneRosary

😆 soooo damn good!!! Axel got what he deserved. And I'm absolutely with you. You are the mother of the characters so you know them the best and I'm on your side. What Yule is saying in this situation definetly understandable!

Ashley

Man fucker deserved more than just a slap. Dude needs a kick in the nads. Man I really do hope someone puts him in his place

Viviane

YULE BABY BOY 🥺❤️ I love him so much! I love that he believe at Ragnar and they dont miscommunicate. I hope that Axel will understand some day to respect the boundaries and just be happy with he had. Maybe some day? And Im 100% with you! Its your story so you know better than anyone what Yule wanted to say. And I think its 100% okay in that situation because Axel dont understand that Ragnar is happy with Yule now. Go Yule 🥺❤️ I hope he dont feel to bad but Im scar...

Nikkita

I know it's supposed to be serious but I was giggling at Yule's tail. It got so floofy lmao😭😆

MegHatter

Yes defend him. Lol the fluffy cat tail was such a good detail. But oh no Yule probably feels bad now cause of Axels last comment. He probably thinks he is jeopardizing the place.

Keru

YASSSSS!!! Way to go Yule! ❤️❤️❤️ Now, author, it would do my heart good if mr whineypants Axel went and bitched to Lars about all this and Lars gave him the middle finger and was done with him too...and Lars stayed on at WBFH and they all lived happily ever after the end 😌😌😌

Deanna Bennett

Yes the slap. But now he going to cry to Lars. I hope Lars doesn't attack Yule

Charles Lumpkin

The trouble with Axel is that he has no clue what true love really is. He treats it like it’s a game and when he doesn’t win in the end then he acts like a spoiled child and throws a fit.