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Comic proofread preview! (Patreon)

Published:
2025-11-21 16:19:21
Edited:
2025-12-07 03:49:52
Imported:
2025-11
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Here's an early look at the almost-final version of episode 3, I've tweaked and fixed some small things across some pages from previous uploads. Please give it a read and let me know if there's any big mistakes on the text or something!

I still have to add a final section for some lore dump, having fun with some incipient worldbuilding and whatnot.

Also, a Featured Comment contest!

Yeah, you read it correctly! I'm resorting to bribery in order to get some more engagement on the comic, it's actually very fun to read feedback and answer questions about the story and characters so I thought I could gift a drawing to make things a bit more entertaining.

Thanks everyone!

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Shawn Heatherly

The comic really is just getting better and better as it goes. Pinups are obviously nice, it's what got me to pledge, but I can feel how much fun you're having making this and that elevates it. It lets you try some weirder, silly stuff in the best way.

D1gital-ZER0

I just have to agree with Shawn. This is so much fun!

Xanio Mastrani

Another phenomenal installment for the P+P series! As much as I love your usual pinups, your comics like this are what truly set you above the rest! Not to mention the comics are fully colored and shaded!! It's the perfect amount of horny and funny that make it more compelling to re-read from time to time! As far as any text mistakes go, there doesn't seem to be anything major I could find. Only thing I did notice is that the page numbers from 10 onwards keep the "0" in front of the number at the bottom, which might suggest that this comic is going to 100+ pages. While that might be the case for the P+P series in the future, the pages seem to reset each chapter. Idk I'm just nitpicking about the damn page numbers. If that's the only problem I could find then you're in pretty good standings as is!

supersatanson

thank you! really appreciate all your thoughtful feedback, I really do even if I haven't replied directly to all of it. I'm indeed having fun by drawing some weird situations! glad it's working well.

supersatanson

thanks a lot! very happy you guys have fun with it

supersatanson

ah, sounds like a small numeration error then. But you missed Kurith's mole on her left buttcheek! I missed that too in some pages, my bad. gotta fix it later on. Anyways, very glad you enjoy the comic so much! thank you

Resident Daisyfan

Sorry, meant tobpost this way sooner! The comic reads fine save for two things on page 10: I'd change "bigger than you're now" to "bigger than you are now" and replace "Don't you" with Didn't you"

supersatanson

ooh thanks! I'll see if I can fix those before the final-final edition release!

Resident Daisyfan

I love the backgrounds and scenery you draw, especially with the Barnut Chest, but every time I see the generic text on posters and stuff I feel compelled to make sure you didn't hide Loss in it.

Resident Daisyfan

Just noticed: On page 10 there's no space in "you know?", on page 11 "ingredients" is spelled "ingredientes", and on the last page Tarnon should say "Now I just gotta rest"