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Here's the fifteenth chapter of my new serialized weight gain novel, "The Kobold Thieves".

Choosing to tackle the challenge of the curse and his gains on his own, Krix infiltrates a fancy masquerade ball. 

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Brilliant!! Absolutely perfect! I couldn't imagine a more fitting fate for Krix, the wonderfully greedy <i>koblob</i> is getting his just desserts <3 <3 <3 This story is now one of my favorites of all time. I was delighted when Trazer showed up, continuing that plot thread always appealed to me but I didn't put too much stock in it happening, and... whoof, it happened so much better than I could have ever imagined. Who could've known Trazer would be such a notorious feeder <3 I did love the build up to it, so many delicious hints in this chapter pointing to his love of heft. And now poor Krix is doomed to be his <b>prize pig</b>, the <i>ever growing centerpiece of Trazer's monument to fattening immensity.</i> I just love how you wrote Krix's foolish greed being his undoing, blinded by the allure gold and jewels to the hazard of just a "few more pounds". If only we could see Trazer's countryside estate, the description of it was beautifully vivid and morish and I've love to know what the rest of his blobs feel about their predicament. Thank you for such a splendid chapter, it'll be impossible to top but I can't wait for the next part of this story. <3