Our Family (WIP) (Patreon)

As usual, this is a work in progress. If you don't want to spoil anything before the comic is done, DO NOT READ THIS POST. However if you want to read this post after the comic is posted, you're more than welcome to look at my thought process and changes.

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Update 2/9:

Panel One mostly done!

I rewrote this script maybe 4 times. This is a particularly hard story for me to tell. I think I may change it once more. There's too many things I want to add in but not enough panels. I'm trying to simplify it but I feel the story wouldn't have the depth I'm looking for.

Update 2/13:

Panel Two and Three  mostly done!

STILL REWRITING SOME MINOR DETAILS ON THE STORY AND IT'S DRIVING ME INSANE. I haven't made much progress on this one as much as I would have liked because it's depressing me so much how hard it is to get this story right.

I'm eating into my buffer and it's killing me. At least I have the main plot down, I just need to fix up the secondary plot a little so it flows better with what's happening.