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Yes, for all those curious, here's the man himself.

So much sci fi pulp in this character, we can't fucking wait to tackle his stuff!!

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Bob

I know who will get my nomination for a short story next month, if the chance is given again of course. You are starting to get the world together :)

Saberpoint

I'm looking forward to this story. Otaku I'm assuming you're supervising the written part of the bios so I'll point this criticism at you. "Ofhimself" and "Auburnhair" need spaces added. The third paragraph contain 2 run on sentences. Yes, commas work, but the grammar could be better. There is nothing wrong with short sentences. If I were to rewrite this paragraph it would read as such: {{Despite the drastic change in his appearance, Sampson's vast intellect and baseline personality was unaltered; mostly. Upon arriving in this new world he is instantly taken prisoner. Dragged to the queendom of the amazons, where an entire race of devastatingly powerful -- and equally beautiful -- women reign. In this rich yet unforgiving land men are subjugated. Lead by their of their tyrannical matriarch, the All-Mvther, the amazons treat men only as tools for hard labor and breeding.}} Just a suggestion, there is always room for improvement and we humans aren't perfect. Until next time, peace.