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The Cult of Maximus, Part 8: The Easy Way (Patreon)

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2016-03-16 15:06:59
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Chief Jones is debriefed on what the officers are up to; she gives Jerry an offer he can't refuse.

Comments

Fusanoshin

Oo I like the opportunity presented to Tom. Given a real nice chance by Jones. By the way, great work with the dialogue. Flowed well, especially for Jones, which also adds to her character.

jakebeserials
>>1515046

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate the feedback! <3 To be honest, I was sweating the dialogue a little bit. It's not something I'm used to writing, so I wanted it to sound natural and literary at the same time. It's not an easy balance to strike.