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Draft of chapter 36 of Game of Kingdoms.

This is the start of (currently) a 6-arc run of Cregan's moves against the Pirate Lords of Redwater. Before then, however, Cregan has to bring his squires in on his secrets, as without doing so he cannot fulfil the promise to Doran Martell for teaching Trystane magic. And then have one final body join the voyage to Redwater.

As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary. I don't pay any attention to those in 1st drafts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zVyesgeBjz4NahpNuTcfaJZrev-iigMvwemi9p5xxvE/edit?usp=sharing

To help with tracking things, here's a map of the Stepstones as of the beginning of this chapter.

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Elaine

good chappie

Lord Dagen

Uuummm I just read that ch. 35 and then went back cause I could have sworn you killed Balon off and a brother not named… I was right ch. 14 about quarter down. So what’s all stuff about Balon then? Delete if you need too… but the question still stands?

USSExplorer

Yeah, spotted that after doing the draft. Altered mentions of the Iron Islands to Victorion as head of the Greyjoys and the Reader is Lord of the Iron Islands

Lord Dagen

Thxs for the reply… good look forward to more adventures. I started the Star Wars story. Never been a huge Star Wars guy but I give it a try. I love swords so light sabers are close enough… (yea I know jape here when I see one) Bahhh…