3.20 Tremors of the Ancient Sith 5 (Lord's Access) (Patreon)

The 5th (of 6) chapters in this arc, and the 20th overall chapter of A New Player.

Cam and company's exploration of Dromund Kaas continues, along with a voyage elsewhere in Sith Space.

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