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The 1st chapter of Book 4 of A New Player in the Force: The Fractured Storm.

The title sort of tells you what's going to happen in this chapter.

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ou_KOQCdjyQVNfr_UYPLMiL4KJa6bZVmBCqowkNs72M/edit?usp=sharing

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