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The Living Planet 4 (General Access) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-02-01 14:01:00
Imported:
2026-06
Tags:
ANP

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Chapter 4 of the arc, chapter 17 of ANP book 2.

The redrafted and semi-beta'ed (still has some work to go I believe) next chapter of Cam's adventures before the public release.

As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Vf972v08V3p5icUYIMk9qCFhjoyvdHeQFSgNalQAH1w/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

maddsloth II

Hi, long time reader of "New Player" just read a lot of chapters and saw you now have a patron account. and just read this one, another great chapter. I guess it is time to prep the Mandalorian's for their next crusade. where three sunlight engines were mounted -should that be sublight? Though let me be clear when this fails, and it does -and it will. if the ship was offering mey advice -me

Dragontaylor

Fay sounds like someone who confuses peace with quiet. Ideals are peaceful, history is violent.

Dragontaylor

Please tell me it won’t be long before Cameron breaks from the order or at least can stop listening to crap like Fay spouts?

Dragontaylor

“let me be clear when this fails, and it does,” should be will there not does? Also: Particularity should be particularly, few lines further down