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First of all, I only realised that I forgot the early release of TLP5 last month when preparing this release. Sorry. I guess my holiday muddled my mind enough I forgot about it.

Moving on, this is chapter 1 of a two-chapter arc (19th overall for ANP: Book2)

The redrafted and semi-beta'ed (still has some work to go I believe) next chapter of Cam's adventures before the public release.

As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ey08ZhyelDyZXJcL75DxI2KMgbJGYsxMlgE6qD3amDo/edit?usp=sharing

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Hayobro

Hello, first off, absolutely love the series. This is such a small detail and it’s not really important to the story per se, but The reason I’m commenting is I noticed that Cam said he discovered that Plo Koon had electrokinesis, but due to Cam’s memory wouldn’t he have already known that. Like I said not an important detail, but anyway. Again love the story and keep up the good work.