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A Deceived Accomplice (General Access) (Patreon)

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2023-06-01 15:00:04
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2026-06
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This is chapter 21 of book 2 of ANP which will be publicly released this month.

The redrafted and semi-beta'ed (still has some work to go I believe) next chapter of Cam's adventures before the public release.

As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mqj5ivkw9ltZ_-_WfSsGa2EhtLv9AMhFx6VdypH5lvw/edit?usp=sharing

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Monkeywrench

I could not seem to find it, but is Cam a Guardian, Sentinel or a Shadow?

TheeGreenBean

The idea that everyone immediately accepts and Cam doesn’t argue against the fact that the force randomly fried him when he tried teleporting seems incredibly ridiculous (I know in this instance Cam understands that Palpatine fried him, but this idea is so ridiculous that I don’t understand why he doesn’t argue against its impossibility). In what other instance does a force power failing (not to mention when has Cameron ever failed to teleport??? Why would anyone think this is plausible in the first place. Thousands of spars where his force powers work completely fine, all the live battles he’s had, oops looks like you had a malfunction for no reason) electrocute someone? Seems like it was completely brushed over to force the plot.