False Necromancer 25-26  (Patreon)

Hi everyone. I'm not going to use this page. 
It just doesn't reach the quality necessary for a 2 page spread. 

There are elements of it that I like, but the camera angle, shot choices, and how it would draw one in could be much better. The ideas and subject matter are okay, but those could be pushed as well. This page needs to be brimming with vitality and a mood. And I could do better.

Sorry - I'll post a commission on Monday and Wednesday. I want to try my hand at making this page epic.