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Here is the first episode of the comic I want to submit to the webtoon contest (Patreon)

Published:
2025-01-03 22:34:28
Imported:
2026-06

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Sam Smith

Nice hook, harsh and beautiful artwork as always. Leaves new readers with a few questions about what this world is like. I'm curious what lore you got cooked up for them. This is still very new so it has so much potential to amaze and bewilder. I'm excited to see how you shape this story. Wish I could have gave more constructive criticism but I'm afraid this is not a field I have experience in. Have a great day. < 3

kod0me

Thank you for the good feedback, I will try my best with next episodes, if this comic won't win anything I think I will turn it into a new series if people on webtoon will love it too, thanks for feedback and support, have a good day my friend

Arjun Kempe

This seems like such a cool opening and concept I’m excited to see what happens

kod0me

Thank you for the feedback and support ☺️

Dreylines

I live things easily so I'm not sure my opinion will help but: I like this webtoon but I have the impression that to win the competition you'd need an extra element that would be catchy (no doubt, I don't know anything about it at all). Otherwise, I still love the graphics and your main story, thanks for all that 🥰🥰🥰 (and sorry to not be able to help more for this story and the context 😅).

kod0me

tbh I was thinking about it too, any ideas? (Thank you for support and feedback)

Dreylines

Maybe leaving something hanging would make readers want to see a sequel and so vote for the webtoon... Honestly, right now I don't really have any ideas 😅

kod0me

Oh, dude, it's just the first episode, 2 more in the process, I will upload them here when I will finish them before submitting them, thank you for feedback, it's important to me, thank you

Dreylines

Oh ok 😅, I can't wait to see what happens next 😁🥰!!!