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97: Bubbling to the Surface (Patreon)

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2019-05-22 09:59:03
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2026-06
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in progress ^^

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97: Bubbling to the Surface

The door lead to a laboratory. The open hall with many tiny connected hallways was a surprising space compared to the Silence pit but Delta used Doctor's eyes to peer into the space. It was more like a dungeon in the realest sense. A place where people were suffered and the sun never touched.

Comments

Sivantic

Can't read on phone, keeps sending me to google support. Anyone else getting this?

Patrick

Yep, same problem on iPad

Daemion

Same issue with Android.

Patrick

It may be because the URL sends you to edit mode instead of automatically switching to view mode.

Alan McBrayer

I really hate the retcon that all of the dungeons are calling the system “Sister”. It was such a big deal when delta called her family that the system was screaming at Nu. And now all of the sudden every dungeon on the planet is referring to her as a Sister which kills ALL of the wonder and meaning out of that moment

Alan McBrayer

Every time I read a dungeon calling system Sister without mentioning that it is a new title I like the story a little less

Roland Hansson

I kind of agree; If this is a retcon, then IMO it ought to be *properly* retconned, with Stew going back and changing those events and foreshadowings in past chapters that don't agree with the new setting details.

SadGuy

I think it's less a retcon, as it's a show of the other Dungeons evolving via Delta's influence.

SadGuy

The Dungeon in the Kingdom recently took up sculpting as a hobby, which he mentioned was a byproduct of the System's prompting. Everyone calling the System "Sis" could just be "Sis's" preference bleeding over into their speech paterns.

Mathieu Martineau

But it's not really shown that way and that's the problem.

Benjamin

I'm not sure that they picked that up from Delta. The name is "The Sister", there are also references to "The Brother". From that creepy dream/story thing.

SadGuy

Just finished reading. I think that "Sis" and "The Sister" are two different concepts here. System loves "Sis" because it makes her sound like family. The other dungeon calls her "The Sister" with full capitals making it more of a title. Considering the other one is "The Brother" it seems more a way of differentiating the two rather than stealing Delta's happy family moniker.

Tonberry

And it suddenly works for me on iPhone now. Hope it works for you too

D J Meigs

After rereading everything, I realised there are a few hints that "Sis" the system is "The Sister" or at least part of her, that I had missed the first time around. As in, "The Sister" oversees the dungeons and created the system, but automatized and usually without awareness so it would work independently for all the dungeons unless she intervened. So the systems are both all the same and seperate systems that can "evolve" depending on how and who uses them. But they are also part of the greater being that is "The Sister" and they give her feedback. And Delta's "Sis" (re?)gained awareness to the point where she became a sort of seperate being and is influencing her (The Sister) more and more, and becoming a dominant part of her personality. At least that is how I interpret it. The hints of this are incomplete but they are there fairly early on, they were just incomprehensible without more background knowledge so I completely missed/forgot/ignored them when in my first read. When a tiny piece of info without much significance (as far as I knew at the time) isn't attached to anything else, it's hard to keep it in mind.

Micah Rutledge

Anyone else worried that we've asked too much of Stewie? Seems asking for three a week is causing them to write less.

Eli

Thank you! Are all of the dungeons becoming artistic?

Stewart92

Oh no. Its less to di with burnout and such. When i post ill explain ^^

Alan McBrayer

The Sister as a title seems fine to me.

jsutdog48

thanks for the chapter!