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Hi,

There you go:

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Hope you'll enjoy it. Feedback is appreciated.

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sqwl

Hey, guys. Thank you for taking your time to write the feedback. I appreciate it.

Joe Pressa

That was great. Your renders look so much sharper, and I noticed a ton of 3d assets I've never seen before - to the point where I was a bit disappointed when Edward cleaned up his new office, as it looked awesome and lived in prior to that. Alice's dialog was maybe a bit more twee/cutesy, but gave her more of a personality/voice. Brown and his interactions with everyone came off extremely likeable and lowkey funny. I also liked Edward seesawing between righteous and ashamed, both in terms of dialog and his expressions. My only criticism would be the end point feeling abrupt like Dhaka1's. Not a big deal or anything, but a minute letdown after Dhaka2's triumph montage. Love your work and hope you'll see dividends after these consistent releases.