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Your Vote Counts! (Patreon)

Published:
2023-09-19 01:32:49
Imported:
2026-06
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We're Enhancing Game Text and Welcoming a New Partner! With her consent, we'll briefly showcase her improved work and seek your feedback through a vote.

This is a privilege exclusive to our sponsors, and the vote determines the overall game quality. Please vote carefully.

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Sebastian Prall

I like the new phrasing, but it needs a once-over for small details. For example: "a excellent yoga-sculpted shape" should be "an excellent, yoga-sculpted shape" "An" instead of "a", plus two adjectives describing the same noun should be separated by a comma ("excellent" and "yoga-sculpted" both describe "shape"). If I'm being annoying, I apologize. I used to work as an editor, so those kinds of details just scream at me.

LMDCLUCKY
>>117895880

No need to apologize at all, you did a fantastic job! We appreciate all the kind efforts that help improve the work.

Serrated

Honestly since it's been brought up, you guys really need to straighten out your grammar. I realize English isn't your first language, and It doesn't have to be perfect, but what you have a lot of the time just doesn't read right.

LMDCLUCKY
>>118163383

Yes, thank you for your advice. We will continue to work hard to make it better and better.