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Play time!!!

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https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1l8ETmLK6xTuCN37s9HPdjxry3cC3Qazc?usp=sharing

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Ali

Love the emphasis on "My Pet" establishing a submissive name and showing that she wants to own and take care of her. All the while having fun :3

Fetishhand

Thank you! I have been trying to do that, where I bold specific words that seem overly important to try give it more meaning, like maybe the character is giving that word and different tone.

Jane chesterman

Such a great page , t shows nicely how the relationship is evolving and how Zoe is really taking care of her pet . I love how you put my pet in bold , I read it as a different emphasis. It's a great submissive name that fits the characters perfectly, it's submissive and shows who is dominant one but it's not harsh . Thank you

Steve Sharofsky

These last two pages really showed Zoe’s growing infatuation with this girl (whose name I can’t remember). The way she’s treating her, you’d think they’ve known each other forever. I know I don’t call my playthings “Pet” until I know them better

Fetishhand

Thank you very much. I'm glad to hear that you enjoy the page and all it's smaller details in the dialogue.

Fetishhand

Do not worry, I have not announced her name just yet. Thank you, infatuation is very good way of describing Zoe's feelings. Though they have just met they seem to have a chemistry that has enraptured them both. Though in a real life situation your tactic would make more sense, of taking your time. I have sped things up and bit as they both get caught up in the situation.