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Face the Storm TEST (Patreon)

Published:
2022-02-12 21:26:39
Edited:
2022-02-12 21:27:06
Imported:
2022-02
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Do y'all think this sounds good as is? in terms of length! I'll be able to add more drums and stuff after.

This is for Dorian Storm btw!

Comments

WereKeidran

I like the instruments though it's a little hard to hear the vocals at the start

SlyFirefly

Not gonna lie, didn't quite hear all the words because the music is a bit too loud in this piece. But the melody by itself is super lovely and I think that just a little bit of drums on the back would be great as well. It's harder to say about the lenght, my gut feeling says that it could be okay to make it a just a tiny bit longer but if adding not only music but lyrics to elongate it -- I think it really depends on if you have anything more to say in this because I don't want to force you to write more words just to make it longer. Wish I could be more helpful, maybe I'll add some more thoughts later.

BladeOfThePoet

Terms of length, sounds good. Not too short, not too long, but still at a point where if you wanted to add more - be it a bridge, some lyrics, instrumental interlude or what have you - it won't feel bloated.

Brian Corvello

Music is good, but like Antony said, can't hear the lyrics.

The Ace of Rogues

As others have said: sounds good, but the lyrics were hard to make out.

Breakfateschain

I agree with previous comments that the instrumental drowned out most of the lyrics, only the chorus was really audible

tinjinkin

I think the length is good, a bit louder vocals and I think it will be great.

Blake McLean

As above, Your voice is amazing as always, no need to hide it. ;)

TurtleKier 42

Length is good, but it's super hard to hear your vocal. Would definitely recommend turning it up or turning down everything else. The instruments sound super awesome so far though!