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GODSLAVE CH 7 PG 043 (Patreon)

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2024-10-09 20:55:48
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Hey guys, let me know: In panel 2, which word balloon did your eyes hit first? Was it 'She's just a puppet!' or 'Aset is in there...' I'm not sure the flow is working correctly, so I appreciate the help!Some deescalation! Don't worry, Sakhmet won't be gone too long ;)

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E G

Is it just me, or does Hathor seem to have slightly different facial features (not the scary ones) when controlled by Sek?

louisxiv

Puppet - because it's close below the previous panel's: Wait, then the 3rd panel's: ...but that aaaand eyeball whiplash back up to 2's: Aset is

Doug Moen

I read top down: puppet, then Aset, then reread the two speech bubbles in left-to-right order so they made sense.

Stephen Gunnell

"She's just a puppet" because my gaze traveled down from the last word balloon to the next nearest word balloon. Luckily (or through good planning) both "Aset is in there, she's just a puppet, but that's still Edith" and "She's just a puppet! Aset is in there ... but that's still Edith" work for the narrative if you don't look too hard at the punctuation. I see that more than one of the other posters assumed that the first version (above) is actually the correct one.

Karvil

I think I saw both at pretty much the same time, but the ellipses got my eyes to jump to actually reading the 'Puppet' balloon first.

Christopher Heiny

I read "puppet" first, "Aset" second, because, well, it flowed that way to me.

eddi_TBH

I dropped straight down from "WAIT" to "puppet". From there "Aset" and the ellipses led to "still Edith". And Hathor needs some willow bark.

Kuku

I saw "Aset is in there" first, so this didn't confuse me. (But - though you didn't ask - a few pages back, where there was Kai with another Edith in different clothes, that confused me. Maybe because of seeing just a page or two at a time, it's harder for me to follow. But I trust you to take us interesting places!)

andwhyisit

Both "Aset is in there... She's just a puppet... but that's still Edith!" and "She's just a puppet! Aset is in there... but that's still Edith." work in terms of word flow.

Stephen Gunnell

Yeah that page labeled "BREAK" confused me too. It doesn't fit with the page before or after. I was going to email Meaghan about it but I forgot. I think it is a future page accidentally dropped in.

Joachim

For me, "she is just a puppet"