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This was a very fun page, despite the delays. I tried something new with how I inked it. Will still be refining this process, but it's not a bad result!

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Simon Magid

Um, it may just be me but the text bubbles in panel three confused me. Due to their positioning I read them in the wrong order first. Maybe if it were placed beneath their heads rather than just above them?

GODSLAVE

Ahh thank you for letting me know, I really appreciate it! I’ll try fiddling with it to make it flow better

Simon Magid

You're welcome. I so enjoy your comic, I'm really glad to be able to help out even in a small way :)