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Let's Make a Book! Chapter 1 pdf (Patreon)

Published:
2016-07-23 19:21:22
Imported:
2026-09

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You guys are officially my beta readers! Attached is a pdf copy of the first chapter. Right now I'm soliciting quotes from local printers. We're almost there!

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Kuku

I love it, and it's so nice to read this way. I'm picking up on a lot more this time through.

Kuku

If you are serious about using us as beta readers, you might want to re-check the sentence on the back cover "... her life becomes a whirlwind of drama, danger of Egyptian mythology." The "drama, danger" part doesn't read right to me. Everything else is fabulous! Congratulations and thanks for the pdf!

TEB

Looks outstanding this way. When you read it week at a time, you don't realize how well it flows from a cinematic point of view. Now I want the rest right away.! I agree that "drama danger" is a bit strange. Would something as simple as "drama and danger." Help?

Hannah Baum

"drama, danger, and Egyptian gods" would work best, I think. SO stoked to have a print copy of this, though :)

Brad

Nice book! On pages 30 and 38, you use the expression "toiling with powers..." Are you sure you don't mean "toying with powers..."? If it's deliberate, keep it -- but it really stands out as an odd phrasing.