Possible enameled keychain or pin design (draft 1) (Patreon)

I thought I shout out for feedback on this. I had to simply the label because this will be 1.5" to 2" on the top to bottom access. much smaller than this image that is larger that life size on my laptop.

The grey will be the metal of the pin, colors enamel. 

The world "Sour" will be added, but I was too tired to do it tonight. And yes, I did re-draw it in vector format after dinner. Thank you for asking :)

I may have too much detail for them to deal with, but in many ways, with vector art, it's easier to remove detail than to add it.

-GReg