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Dakkota

Just Wow!

Lumination

"Soft little tummy" had me giggling hard, to be honest. Everything else is A+.

satin

Hah, when you're trying to write all the gooey details, there's always the risk of sounding corny. That's why I enjoyed making Dark Altar so much.

Lumination

There's such a fine line between sexy and cheesy with this sort of writing. The results are almost always great either way though!

Alexia

As I'm not a native, I'm not sure my insights are relevant, but still: I loved the contrast between the thick hard Torin's thing and Alison's "soft little tummy". I didn't feel it was cheesy. More generally, I love the way Alison describes her experience: not only I find it sexy, but it's interesting and I have learnt something reading it. I understand it's easier to deliver Dark Altar - I'm talking about the story telling part, as far as you can dissociate it from the art. But Alison's story operates at many levels, and occupy in my mind much much more room than Dark Altar. (By the way, I also like Dark Altar...)