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Excuse the amount of mistakes i might write but i´m doing this quickly before calling it for the day.

SPOILERS! (DOWN BELLOW)

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OK SO THIS IS WHAT I HAD IN MIND:

-Chi-chi tells what she did to Goku, we see Mamma Goku taking care of the kids

-unbeknowst to everyone, she sees Goten and trunks trying to escape, she considers trunks a bad influence and x factor to Goten´s misbehavior, so she turns him into a smart, studious, nerdy girl and she makes goten stay and focus on his homework. (Perhaps a quick future trunks tg due to the circumstances?)

-Bulma asks to play with Chi-Chi´s power and transforms Vegeta into a Stepford wifr (she is not mad at Vegeta, but since he isn´t too prone to do stuff like cleaning and cooking, she tries to have a little fun with the idea of him doing the chores)

-girls go to a club, and they have fun. chi-chi makes them a little more loose/relax.

-They start messing around, making fun of Chi-Chi, so she makes Bulma a dumb bimbo.

they keep having fun until they piss chi-chi again so she starts uses her power to make both more nerdy/shy and physically inferior to her.

Chi-chi could undo this and fuse both girls into 1 bff super girl.

She gets tired of all this and takes off with her new bff.

fusion is undone, Chi-Chi thinks about how she never had a daughter, and since she is still a little mad, she turns 18 into her daughter and Bulma into 18´s doll.

She undoes everything and sends them all home, but makes 18 more "mom-like" women (like chi-chi used to be) and Bulma kinda the same but less sexy than she usually is. (This is just temporary still)

Chi-Chi returns home, makes Mama Goku normal, but is still undecided, but stuff makes Goku her little daughter.

Chi-chi decided to rid the world of menaces and kinda takes powers away from any evil doer in the universe (quick freezer tg cameo as he is changed into a nice "princess of the galaxy)

Beerus and his show up, who know everything, but after seeing that Chi-Chi is no major threat, they decided to let her be.

She sees how the rest of the z warriors are doing in life, but she do not try to change them beyond trying to make them marry and get a job.

Final fate for Goku. Not sure what still.

could be making him stay either as one of the previous forms, but slightly conscious of how she used to be, or why she is how she is now.

Option B: Perhaps a different final new form/fate for Goku

Maybe let you decide the new final fate of which of the 4 former fates becomes the final one

also thought about doing all endings as a multiple ending story, but it could be too much and drag the comic even more.

Comments

Rubyinabox

First off. Sounds like a monster project. Quite a impressive roadmap honestly. Highly jealous at your planning and event planning. Truly great. Im excited to see the art and story pieces no matter the final outcome or end result decided on hiatus or not. I hope you are having a great year and many best wishes. Personally. Lol. Just makes me go. Dang. This Chi-Chi is a villian and never appreciated Goku or anyone at all. From "Revenge" to psychopath. But that's personal for my thoughts to understand the story rationally. Not at the shot at the artist, or story creator or other patrons. Cruelty for Cruelty sake in any media i gotta wait months for to see the outcome gets...less fun.

Anon

Yes this is amazing the doll tf is great but I think leave momma goku as is

Dukect

I hope you have a good day. Yeah, cause this seems to be a very fun story that morphed is something even bigger. Chi-Chi has become a low-key villain. It will be nice that if Gohan talks to her and she realizes she is doing the wrong thing and changes everyone back to normal except the big bads like Frieza lol. Or she becomes a full villain and Viz stops her and turns her into a baby and have momma Goku raise her

Anon

Actually on top of this I think the jealousy angle is great having her get jealous of her friends new forms and making them uglier/ nerfing them

Cole jones

I like some of the transformations but some of them I also don't like particularly turning them into nerds or turning Bulma into a doll. What I would like to see is Chi Chi and the others go to see mama Goku and as Bulma and 18 leave something dark in Chi Chi makes her compelled to turn Goku into an absolutely sexy daughter to chi chi and while going with the feeling turns trunks into a smart but sexy woman as well and since she has always wanted daughters turns gotten into a teenage smart bimbo as well and best friend of the new bimbofied trunks. Bulma asks if she can use Chi chi's powers for a bit and she agrees so she goes to her house and turns Vegeta into a stepford wife and maybe turning her dad into a sexy gilf and her mom into her own sexy sister. Before she leaves a voice in her compels her to turn Vegeta into a sexy milf. Afterwards she makes a stop at Roshis and after all the years of perverted stuff he has done to them she decides to make him into a sexy bombshell like he has always been after. Following this they go to the club where they proceed to dance and have fun but as they indulge in their new sexy bodies Chi Chi unconsciously starts changing her friends even more causing them to get a little less intelligent and more bimbofied it even starts to change her own body more. After she gets a bit bored she decides they should leave and end up back at Chi Chi's house where they see what she did to gotten, Goku, and trunks and at first are horrified before their minds change and they see it as more fun then anything else. From here they start to cause some chaos going to Videl and making her a new bimbo as well and joys them for the fun afterwards Gohan shows up and there can be two ways it ends either he gets changed too and from there chi chi changes all the Z fighters and their villains into bimbos while she takes their powers. Or Gohan is able to reache her and she changes many of them back but keeps some of them in their new sexy forms but they think it's the norm she even changes Goku into a sexy hardworking himbo for her own enjoyment. I know this doesn't sound perfect but really what I love about the comic is seeing everyone get turned into bimbos whether it be a canon thing in the story or just something bonus you do.

Matt R

This sounds like a Majin Buu type scenario where ChiChi will separate into good and evil beings somehow

Cole jones

Maybe the power corrupts her and causes her mind and what she wants to split between her normal self and her new bimbo sexy self

kabutoGouki

Yes, the idea grew a lot more than I expected. Your ending idea is something i never considered. not sure how things are gonna end up but i´ll try to take chi-chi back to the good side

kabutoGouki

thoguth the same. i think 18 looks way hoter than her now and she might not like that

kabutoGouki

wow! that takes thing to a whole new level

Cole jones

Do you mean that in a good way or a bad way?

kabutoGouki

Yes, the idea grew more than anticipated. I always welcome feedback and input. I really didn´t want for chi-chi to seem so villainous, gonna try to steer her deamanor a little so she doesn´t come up soo cruel

Rubyinabox

Oh absolutely. And again this was just one persons personal view. I think for me. Its the fact that most the outcomes on the brilliant roadmap end with people permanently denied choice, dreams and even a resemblance of themselves. Which is just villianous. And to make clear, nothing wrong with that. Lol. If this is a villian story, its a A+ I think the touches of ending threats and helping other get married is sweet. But Goten looses his best friend Trunks, Goku can't have his life at all, Vegeta might be stuck a woman for just existing and not doing chores , 18 and Bulma are bullied and get turned into mom moms bodies cause Chi-Chi is jealous. Honestly. A+ Villian and outcomes for characters that did little wrong. Not at all negative feedback. Villian stories exist. They gotta. Im absolutely sure the art, sequences and story will be fantastic. Chi-Chi of this made me go. "Dang, you're awful. Its okay to be petty and whimsical little revenge. Some lessons to teach. But you're a cruel goddess who hated everyone"

insert name here

I really like the outline you have set out here. I think the only thing I wish got added here is giving Gohan a change as well. Perhaps for a bit Chi-Chi changes both gohan and goten into her daughters to see how things would have been before changing them back, maybe then leading to her changing Trunks

kabutoGouki

could be, gohan is like the perfect son for her but if she wanted just tosee how would he be as a girl it could be done quickly

kabutoGouki

No problem at all, but still, only Goku´s changes (and Freeza´s) were the only ones I envisioned as permanent. the rest are just temporary games

Rubyinabox

Fascinating and interesting! Well i can't wait to see the rest of your vison play out. Sign me up for the ride then. Im hooked. Lol Hopefully my vison of this Chi-Chi goes from "worse then Frieza super villian" to "I'm just whimsical and venting guys, relax" Still think karma should come into play. But seeing how she can mind control and stuff. Probably not. Can't guilt someone who can make you forget. Haha. Thanks for chatting back and forth. Greatly appreciate it. And your wonderful vison and story and art.