Opinions needed for this project - Y.C.H Cursed Objects (Patreon)

Sacrificed some free time yesterday to get this done quickly, while Patreon is helping me pretty well to live by myself, prices of everything keep rising, and so it seems that one way or another, I do have to take some form of commission each month.

I don´t know how to call this properly (it's not a Raffle and is more than comms), but it might be a quick and more controlled form of commission to do.

i would love to hear your input since I´ve never done one of these before.

Please feel free to share, criticize, suggest anything I should adjust or if you think i should change any of the items. anything!

if you can read it well, there´s a bigger file in attachments