Progress Report | Over the Moon - 08/12/2024 (Patreon)
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Usurp is one of Suzi's most important scenes. I've taken some extra time to write the script the way it needs to be written. We'll see Suzi and Henry's perspective on AI taking on more responsibility in society. This is also where we'll finally see the consequences of your choice in A Moment of Bliss regarding whether to tell Henry about Suzi or not. The split is here. My only concern here is that the MC is mostly just here to witness the event. He won't play a big part or have much to say. I know that's not great story-telling, but he was never meant to have major impact on Suzi's grander storyline. It is what it is. We will be returning right back to Moon. She intimidated by how things are back home. We'll also see her go confront Jillian, and that's about where I am right now. These scenes jump around a lot. I'm having to setup more scenes than usual. TL;DR: It's all progressing fine. No hiccups, no delays. Thanks for all the support, and I'll have a progress report of The Judas Ghost on Thursday. Stay hydrated!