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POV Sophie Martinez

Both of the men are feylith. While our contact shows no reaction and his hair stays brown as well as his eyes, the man hit by the money chain turns his hair and eyes to pale red before they shift to white.

I noticed, but there is no sense to their hair colors. For someone, anger can be white hair, and for someone else, it is black. It is just that each individual has their own colors and their own range.

Our contact quickly gestures at the new man, who bows and picks the chain from the ground. I calculate the worth of two upper arcane items on them.

“I apologize for my colleague, Sir Elydor.”

“Let’s not waste my precious time on such annoying things,” Nathaniel steps ahead as if he owns the place and our contact is forced to follow behind him. “As my servant has informed you, I’m willing to auction off one of the two beasts I have bought for my daughter.”

“But I want them both!” Izzy sobs quietly. Through our link, she quickly shares information on the emotions of the people. I meanwhile don’t directly manipulate the feylith man with us, but nudge him, just a tiny bit, gently so no detection sparks up.

“How tiresome. Well, if you want them both, maybe you shouldn’t shame me in front of my... business partners.” Nathaniel fixes his glasses and looks at our contact. “I’m not cruel enough to take both the snake and whatever beast the second one is, but it is a lesson she needs to get. Do you agree?”

“O-of course, I...”

Nathaniel doesn’t even let the feylith finish and sighs. “Spoiled one, that’s what she is. But at least she has some talent for combat. Would you agree that being so close to level 300 at her age is somewhat impressive?”

“Yes, Sir Elydor, I find it very im...”

“Yes, yes. So, which beast do you think would be more interesting for your auction house?”

To that, the feylith pauses our walk and looks at Izzy. It forces Nathaniel to stop, after which he shows his impatience by tapping the tip of his foot on the marble floor. Biscuit is currently dozing off and pretending to sleep. His tiny tail wags a little bit to show how much fun he has. Meanwhile, Noodle is coiled around Izzy’s arm and curiously observing the area with his six green eyes.

“Honestly, Sir Elydor. This is not how we usually go about things. There are procedures and protocols our auction house must follow.”

“I find it remarkably foolish that you believe me incapable of discerning that all these protocols are quickly forgotten when there is money to be made.” Nathaniel sounds as if he is making fun of him. “Well, my dear friend. I plan to leave as soon as possible with that Weredeer still around. If I sell one of the pets, it will mean less trouble when travelling.”

“But I want them both!”

“Isabella, I have to say I’m disappointed in your lack of decorum. But what would I expect, considering how much time you have spent with your mother. I always told her she was spoiling you.” Nathaniel looks at me.

It catches me off guard, but as planned, I stay quiet and give him a very angry look before looking away.

The silence is awkward, and the feylith man steps from foot to foot and laughs a bit nervously, as Nathaniel doesn't seem to mind it at all.

“Feisty, isn’t she? At least I have a few more wives that are nicer to me.”

At this point, I can’t help but send through the link, (The fuck?)

Izzy sends a message as well, (Soph, be careful with your nudging. He seems to be trained.)

I quickly answer, (I know, I’m modifying my strategy.)

Nathaniel doesn’t show the slightest reaction and turns to the feylith. “You have my permission to look at the beast. I saw how you couldn’t take your eyes away from him.”

“Was I that obvious?” The feylith laughs awkwardly and steps towards Izzy before saying, “May I, little Lady?”

“NO!” Izzy shouts and hides Biscuit in her arms. “My friends will make fun of me if you sell one of them! They will call us poor again, and I will never be able to marry!”

(Nat, I want to make him begin to think we are in financial trouble. Try to brag about how you are rich a bit more,) She shares.

I start to think that maybe my sister and Nat are enjoying this too much, as I see him put up an act.

“Isabella, but we aren’t poor,” Nathaniel says with mild disbelief, like she just announced something deeply inconvenient rather than emotionally dramatic. “We are, in fact, offensively wealthy,” he continues, brushing imaginary dust from his sleeve. “Which makes this display somewhat confusing.”

The feylith laughs again, thin and unsure, as if he has been accidentally invited into a family argument and does not know which side is safer.

(Push a bit, Sophie.) I receive.

“Yes, Sir Elydor, no one of proper standing would ever assume-”

Nathaniel glances at him with two cold, differently colored eyes, his trait constantly shifting behind the glasses. The man immediately stops talking and changes his attention back to a safer target.

He steps closer, eyes tracing the line of Noodle’s body. “The serpent’s mana structure is unusual,” he murmurs almost involuntarily. “I think I also sense a fragment within it. How curious and exotic. It would attract collectors who value uniqueness.”

Nathaniel does not look at him and instead observes a statue nearby. “And the other one?”

To that, the feylith lowers his head and looks at the nearly sleeping pretend corgi. He observes him very deeply and even puts on an item in the shape of a monocle. Then he reaches out, takes Biscuit from Izzy’s arms, and holds him up in the air by his scruff.

(Stop.)

It takes me a moment to realize that it is Biscuit saying it. Then another that it is meant for Nat, and not me.

When I look at him, he stands there with his eyes wide open. They are terrifying. Gray and brown, and the golden light trying to push from behind his black pupils.

That gaze isn’t even the worst part. I know if he willed it, the entirety of his mana would move in the next second and fill this hallway, like a walking nuclear reactor just waiting to explode. I also see how close he was to it, too. This lunatic would not care at all, he would turn this feylith man into a blood splatter on the wall.

Meanwhile, Biscuit doesn’t react much. He just opens his eyes and blinks slowly while the feylith man holds him and talks, unaware of Nathaniel’s expression. "How surprisingly cute, this little beast. I have to say, I have never seen this specific one. The serpent is rare, yes, but something about this one... its musculature suggests extraordinary compression strength,” he murmurs. “If it were displayed in a controlled demonstration, the bids would be… enthusiastic."

"Did you buy it already?" Nathaniel asks in a cold voice.

The feylith doesn’t seem to be aware of the danger as he continues to curiously observe and probe the corgi. "Sir Elydor, of course, I didn’t buy anything yet. It is not that simple." He even laughs.

"Why are you touching something that is mine, then?" That lunatic’s voice becomes even colder. He takes a step that feels too loud, as if it bounces off the very walls of the hallway.

"He is not an item, father! He is a living being." Izzy takes Biscuit from the man’s arms and takes a step back.

Only then does Nathaniel’s expression begin to turn back to normal as the feylith says calmly to her, “Everything is an item, young lady. The difference lies in who controls the exchange.”

The feylith laughs softly, trying to ease the atmosphere, though his hair flickers faintly toward pale gold.

(Greed, layered with apprehension. He also looks down at you and is very smug about it. Brag about how rich you are to confirm his feelings. As Nathaniel says something and the man begins to answer, you can push a bit more, Soph,) Izzy sends in the link.

As the feylith turns back to him, Nathaniel finally smiles. “I must say, your comprehension of the purpose of this visit is abysmal,” he says calmly. “I am not here because I need coin. I am here because I dislike clutter.”

In reaction to that, the feylith opens his mouth, and I push. I touch his mind, feel the movements of his thoughts, and then push and pull at the correct places. It is almost all instinctual, something I can feel and modify according to his reactions, changing things even before my conscious mind perceives them.

For a faint moment, he furrows his brow, but it soon smoothes out, and he smiles.

(Arrogance. He is looking down at you. Annoyance at how you treat him. Great interest in Biscuit,) Izzy shares right away.

"I worry I have to go now, Sir Elydor, but why don't we meet again tomorrow at the same time? Somewhere more private within our Auction House?"

(Good, this will let him feel like he punished you, and the moved meeting makes him feel he is more in control. Tell him you don’t have time, Nat.)

"Do not take me for some-"

And for the first time, the feylith interrupts Nat. "I said, I have time tomorrow."

As Nat opens and closes his mouth, his words dying before he can spit them out, he clenches his teeth and gives a stiff nod.

I notice a patch of the man’s hair shift to a dark red hue, and then he smiles.

***

POV Nathaniel

As we leave the auction house, I keep my posture upright and offer Sophie my arm. She hangs onto it as we walk through the street, maintaining the image just in case they are watching us. To sell the lie, we have even rented a house located a few levels above where Group 4 currently lives. Someone might call it a waste of money, but we have to be sure.

Only once we are back inside the tower and safely within the Group 4 rooms do we drop the act. Sophie pulls away from me, and Biscuit floats into my arms, where I begin to pet him. I don’t have a crown floating over my head, but I am storing mana inside my body. Ruler of Diligence, be my witness, that the auction house will burn down before this floor ends.

"You almost fucking attacked him right there!" Sophie shouts at me.

"I think it would have added to my act of an arrogant noble keeping his identity secret if I did that," I defend myself.

"I don’t think so, Nat," the traitor Izzy says, supporting her sister.

"Want to see something, Izzy?" I ask as I untie my tie, throw it over an armchair, and shrug off my suit jacket. "Feel my emotions now and tell me if I’m lying when I say I would react the same if anyone from our group was treated that way instead of Biscuit."

Sophie doesn’t even let her sister answer. "I just want to know if you realize what almost happened and that you won't splat the guy if he decides to be a dick tomorrow."

"I probably won’t do that. Right, Biscuit?" I swing him gently while holding him in my hands, and he woofs a few times.

***

We make our preparations, and I let Sophie and Izzy talk it out. With part of my mind, I listen to Izzy explaining what the man felt, which hair and eye colors match which emotions, and theorizing how to make him do what we want. We conclude that tomorrow we will return with just Izzy, me, Biscuit, and Noodle.

A part of me finds it scary how easily Izzy talks about the man’s emotions, where to push to make him do what she wants while making him think it was all his own idea. Unlike what Sophie does, our little empath’s ability leaves no trace. Damn, she even mentions she can sense when the man suspects something and knows exactly how to make him drop it, making him feel confident and in control instead. She proved as much earlier today.

It all makes me remember Adrian. He is an empath as well, but unlike Izzy, he is much more ruthless and never minds using it to his advantage. The memories I saw from Lioren tell me that Adrian started with [Empathy] the same way Izzy did. Considering you usually start with skills you have a talent for, skills that come from within, I find the comparison interesting.

Two people. One of them gained [Empathy] because she had a talent for feeling people’s emotions and wanted to help them. The other had the very same talent but used it to exploit people for his own ends.

That skill might not look like much, but combined with the fact that it is one of the most difficult to detect, it can be truly terrifying.

That night, I also watch the city from the tower and notice plenty of movement down there. Encrypted messages are being passed along, people are moving through the darkness. Someone important and very powerful seems to pass by before heading west, back toward where we entered this floor.

I really don’t think we have much time. My mood hardens, and I confirm with myself that I will be ready tomorrow, so I don’t hesitate. If it is required, I will kill everyone in that auction house. With my black mana and Biscuit’s help, I can erase all traces, and Noodle can eat the egg to transport it out without being detected. It is something he is capable of.

Likely sensing these emotions, our empath steps onto the balcony and looks toward the night city with me. She doesn't say a word, only briefly squeezing my hand before returning inside.

And as I gaze on all these lights alone, I continue to think that it used to be easier to kill people. Even now, I don’t differentiate that much between tutorial natives, attendees, or the locals in Beyond. Yet I find that the more powerful I become and the more options I have, the less I prefer choosing such an easy way.

I still know I can do it. I wouldn’t hesitate to burn this entire city to the ground, and I won’t feel sad if anything like that happened. Still, something in there is changing.

And so I wonder. Maybe, just like that feylith today, I also have been manipulated into being like this by that green-eyed girl.

Or maybe it’s just me.

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Comments

Chase

SPLAT

Fdrugc

Tftc

Konrad Pagacz

I love the inner dialogue at the end. The self reflection that actually questions the motives, is not just answers given on the platter, but leaves the reader with more unknowns, more uncertainty. Lets us have our own takes on what's happening, our own judgement. It's giving power to the readers - we can at least for a while determine what's going on with the characters and it's super engaging. Nicely done. I am becoming more and more surprised by how you have grown as a writer. I don't know how much of that is conscious and intentional (and how much it's LLMs xd), but it's getting really good. Broaching onto some moral discussions about power, responsibility, ethics, etc. It's really good.

Nemesis

Why not both, Nat?

Terri Harris

I miss the Izzy that casually burned bad people up. I know she'd been mind blended, but I still think a little more ruthlessness would totally fit with her being a 13yr old girl. I keep hoping she'll snap and give Nat the go ahead with operation kill everyone and steal the egg. Fingers crossed! Tftc!

Lance Beam

TFTC. I worry for Izzie. [Empathy] may be one of the hardest skills to detect but if detected by the wrong person, it will go very badly for her and Group 4.

ChildConsumerServices

Was a very tasty chapter then Fruadrian was mentioned and the flavour was ruined 😔

John

Yeah, in these Teenage age, people often are overly "rational" without beeing reasonable. (speaking from experience)

hhOzo

I thought Adrian had Reflection and not true Empathy

Adrian Rake

Well, who is stronger Nat or Izzy? 🤔

Andrew

Thank you!

DasThammo

He has. But I think Nat suspects that he started with Empathy which evolved into Mirror.

RJ Barnes

The way we don’t really know what is going on between the the group and their internal thoughts except for small blips gives the story an amazing form of suspense but also discovery. WELL FRIGGEN DONE

Kevin

It depends on the teen in question. Teenagers are people and people come in all personalities. Although given her situation, I really don’t know what kind of a person Izzy will be.

John Smith

Does this novel use LLMs..? I don’t think it does, and that’s not a great thing to say without proof…

Kevin

I would be absolutely shocked if Cerim used an LLM in any capacity save as a spellchecker. I have never even heard of an LLM making something half as good as what Cerim writes.

Kevin

Of all the mental skills to possess, I think Empathy is probably the most socially acceptable and innocent one there is. If someone finds Sophie out they might just try to kill her on the spot, but why would they object to a teenager being good at knowing what someone feels. It’s not like Empathy is a dangerous mental skills.

Manaless

At least Nat knows he has wives 😂. I think Isabela didn't manipulate him much, since, as Fraudian said, he has many conflicting thoughts at the same time, he would know.

Kevin

I absolutely loved seeing that Nat, Izzy, and Sophie Scene. Seeing the tutorial attendees messing with the natives is awesome.

Tishane :Imperial MageKiller

Is there a picture of Nat with his new eyes im trying to imagine them but I think getting it wrong 😔

Jimbo

Izzy never manipulates you much. Just the tiny amount necessary. That's why she's scary

Jimbo

Kids that age get angry pretty easily.

Jimbo

Izzy should be around level 320 not close to 300 based on the end of the last floor. She should have gotten XP from a bunch of kills way above her level

DeadbearKill

I think what you’re missing is Izzy can sense every emotion from everyone she’s met from 9 floors. The best and the worst. I think when you have enough examples of what you don’t want to be, it’s easier to choose a different path. Teenage or not imo.

Bandit General

Facts, and it’s hard to sense. Like with nat high perception, you would have expected him to sense something, which he did in the past, but now Izzy has gotten to good. Nat is in the dark,

Bandit General

Nat trait is amazing and all , and it does synchronize with his other traits, it also will help with his empyrean lance and it creates that field that block influence. But right now it’s a bit of let down. Like we don’t get to see any major boost or new abilities. Not that I’m complaining. Is just that I was so hyped for a whole month and then I get this. And honestly I think it’s Cerim playing us

Gwiddion

he got 1 extra possible improvement in all other traits got 9 skill levels. and that is nothing to u?

Matthew Statz

One thing I've been wondering about, especially after his recent third trait, is when people get the second stage of their characteristic advancement , or whatever it's called. His Vast Mana- even Lissandra was only at the second stage, I think? Might be misremembering that. I'm just curious at what level that happens for people .

zoarian

This is one of the stronger chapters you've written. The central theme of empathy to achieve the heist, empathy as a skill and Nat's musings on his own character are tightly woven together. I particularly like the way they play "roles" for the heist and how that mirrors how we all project our own character into profiles/work/home life. Especially as I think Nat's actually just lying to himself. He would feel bad for killing a city, he already does feel a lot of empathy. Could he do it? Absolutely. However, I think it would hurt him emotionally. He's just denying it cause he's plays the role of strength within his group, and that's based on Victoria. I'm glad he's departing from that archetype and not murder-hoboing his way through problems.

Arme nd

I imagine them like a ring that spikes out like mountains, kinda asymmetrical that keep switching.

Gwiddion

same thought it would also be achieved at 400 but i misremembered. perhaps u gain it by completing a huge achievement as a quest reward. so no set level point. Its just sth u gain by completing a very difficult objective. similar to the three and possible 4 passive combination tokens.

Alexander

I think you're underestimating how much Powerful cultivators hate their percieved privacy being invaded

Kirin

Thank you for the chappie!

I need more strength stuff future me

Hey, is there any chance that Nat's heterochromia affects his trait in the future? I think it would be nice to see how conditions like that affect growth and abilities.

Matthew Statz

The vice director, or whatever her title was, with the owl? Ya I was thinking about her and it seems like it's gotta be separate from champion or absolute or any of that stuff, or at least he hasn't drawn any clear link that I've picked up on. Also, do we know if Lissandra got to stage 2 or 3 of mana potency? If I'm remembering correctly and she only made it to 2, then id LOVE to see what kind of being makes it to the third stage.

Lizy Flore

I think he was lying

Jimbo

Ah, makes sense.

Tishane :Imperial MageKiller

Thats what i was thinking like Sasukes EMS but like hospital machine movements, or like Nikkluas from vampire diaries hybrid eyes but with gray and brown instead of the werewolf yellow irises and maybe like a sunshine pulse behind them?

Isaac Lung

Maybe the original Lissandra was at stage 3. Tutorial Lissandra had to be heavily nerfed and even then she was very close to stage 3.

A.R.

I picture them more like a bit of a quasar effect with the edge of light shifting from up to down

Chun

That was tutorial Liss though. The real Liss still spent a large amount of time towards the end of her life traveling with Ruby and killing various absolutes after leaving their planet. I think there’s a chance she could have achieved the third stage during that time. But yea if anyone’s going to have that third stage upgrade for a stat, it would definitely be pride. This does make me curious though as to what the other upgrades does. I vaguely recall the upgrades for strength and constitution being mentioned but I’m not sure. It would be nice to see if Nat could try and guess the upgrade his enemy chose when fighting them.

Ivan Jelenić

He's probably comparing killing his father with killing others. There must be some emotional interplay there.

Ivan Jelenić

You first have to define what "stronger" is.

Ivan Jelenić

I wonder when she will be ready for the mind-unblend. That will be a very interesting character arc.

Ivan Jelenić

I wouldn't mind the use of LLMs in the capacity of editors or mentors or someone to talk to to flesh out ideas. They're a great tool to enhance what you're doing and making it easier. It's basically as if Cerim talked with knowledgeable colleagues, which is usually good. I understand that probably most writers and readers don't think of it this way and despise the use of LLMs, period. But you don't have to use them to write for you, just for advice or just someone to talk to about your craft and ideas - and your don't even have to take their advice.

Kevin

We do know your physique affects the way the system upgrades and changes you. I love the idea of his heterochromia affecting his traits, but I do find it hard to believe that something as small and inconsequential as eye color will have any significant impact on his traits.

dwrex smile

I have to say, empathy isn't really enough to control people. Knowing how they feel is one thing. But moving our talking in a way to provoke a desired reaction would be difficult. She's had plenty of practice though. I'm decent at poker. I can read people and know their cards. But knowing their cards is not enough. I have crap luck and can't control my opponents reaction. Like how do I make them fold when we both have a crap hand so they don't pick up anything. Or how to get them to put more money in when I do have something.