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There is a guard in front of the enormous metal gate, which is so thick it makes me wonder if it could endure a nuclear bomb or two or a hundred. That guard in front of it is a three headed corgi, the size of a regular corgi.

(Pay) (Sacrifice) (Determination)

All three heads speak.

We look at each other, and soon Sneaky steps ahead, pulling out what looks like a figurine in the shape of a deer. Looking closer, I realize it is made of dried meat.

He places it carefully in front of the three headed corgi, whose heads follow every single motion of the figurine. One head, which seems the goofiest, tries to reach out and bite into it, but the remaining two stop it and nudge it away.

Then, the three headed corgi looks at me.

It all almost seems like a joke, as if we could ignore it or try to force our way through, but something in the back of my mind tells me that is impossible. For every second I hesitate, the corgi grows bigger, and its presence weighs heavily over us all.

With that presence also comes an understanding of the rules of this place, rules that our opponent is bound to follow in the exact same way we are.

I know what is expected of me, so I move my left hand, stretching my fingers to slash and separate my right arm at the elbow as a sacrifice that I know will be mirrored outside of this mental space.

But before I can finish the movement, I hear a painful groan behind me that makes me stop. There, Sophie clenches her head, offering a painful smile to the corgi, who sniffs toward her before nodding.

“She has sacrificed all her memories of Izzy from the past year,” Sneaky whispers.

Looking at the green-eyed girl, a shudder runs through me. I cannot understand that decision. I was about to do it, my sacrifice would be lesser. Even then, if she truly had to, why hadn't she tried to sacrifice a part of her body instead, a limb, an eye?

I want to shout at her, to shake her for not understanding how important those memories were. Yet, I bring myself to a halt when I see her expression.

With a surge of anger, I turn back around, now fully understanding the level of determination required to open the last lock on the door.

The three headed corgi shakes, blurs, and shrinks a little. Then, only one head remains, leaving a puppy that is a perfect mirror of Biscuit.

(Food?) That young, boy-like voice sounds in my head just as I lift my hand and makes me hesitate.

It sounds exactly like him.

Even the feeling of our connection is the same, along with his movements and the look in his eyes. I almost begin to think he is actually here with us as his tongue lolls out.

(Nathaniel. Friend?) He asks, confused, as he feels my emotions and my intentions.

“Not a friend,” my voice sounds weakly, and I wave my hand, causing the pup to instantly explode in a burst of kinetic energy.

A piece of fur and flesh lands on my bony leg along with blood, making me feel like throwing up, but cold rage takes over. In the back of my mind, I constantly remind myself, like a mantra, that it is nothing but a fake, and that I need to do this so we can continue.

Only then, after a few long seconds, does the voice sound one last time.

(Open)

And the huge metal door begins to open, revealing the only entrance into the volcano.

A small hand finds mine, and when I look to my right, Vega is holding it, smiling at me.

“Yes, I know,” I say, taking a glance at Sophie before we all continue inside at the same time, just as the door closes behind us.

Our group silently continues into the interior of the volcano, which is a huge hollow column with spiraling multicolored glass stairs coiling around its walls, heading down toward the magma gathered at the bottom. It is dead quiet there, and no one seems to be around at all.

The deeper we go, the more the pressure on my mind strengthens, and the more my thought acceleration forcefully increases. That presence of our opponent can now be felt all around us. I can almost feel it trying to decipher this place, to get into our minds. It tries to search for what I have been hiding from it.

That presence is something that used Tariel the Undying as an anchor, a portal into our minds through Sophie, who, even with all her skill, failed to notice it. She triggered an ancient protocol imbued into the kaiju skeleton lying outside of the Kindreds' city, and that summoned our enemy.

The closer we get to it, the more I learn about it too. I mimic the same way it looks into us to look back, and there I find it at the bottom of the stairs we are walking down. It is within the area where the pressure will become too much even for someone like Sophie, and even for me. At least, without my subminds.

A demigod waits there.

A presence set to be awoken once the kaiju fulfill certain conditions.

And now here it is, facing us, on the brink of falling asleep again, and probing our minds to learn more. A true mind, unlike the emotionless, machine-like beings that are the kaiju.

I don't know how much time passes outside, but for me here, it feels like days or maybe even weeks of constant walking down.

Sophie, even if not fully realizing what she has sacrificed, has an idea about it. There is a big gap after all, and due to that, a deep hatred smolders inside of her. And I haven't forgotten the test of determination either.

Two-thirds of the way down to our enemy, there is another door in the wall that we go through, passing by cells with people imprisoned inside. I recognize plenty of them. Some even make me angry or sad, but I pass by each of them, reaching the final cell that is hundreds of times bigger than any other.

Inside it are two beings. One is my submind that handles primordial energies: a demon with my face, short horns like Vega's, and red eyes. He is shirtless, showing his muscles as he does push-ups.

Behind him is the wyvern that escaped from the 12th floor of Beyond, with the only difference being that this one has two wings.

My submind puts on a bright smile upon noticing us and waves at Vega, who waves back at him. He takes his mantle from the ground, the one with the fur around the neck, similar to the one placed on me during my coronation. He dusts it off, after which he just walks toward us and passes through the prison bars that are each as thick as he is and tower high up, imprisoning the wyvern but making it easy for him to pass.

Shortly after, he waves goodbyes to the wyvern, which continues to lie there lazily.

“Ignore the two winged wyvern, he is just a bit shy,” he tells us, taking the lead as we follow him back onto the stairs.

“Wouldn't a two winged wyvern just be called a wyvern?” Sophie asks Sneaky quietly.

Nerdthaniel answers instead, “Please ignore Demonthaniel. He can be a bit… special.”

Though hearing him, our new companion ignores the comment and kneels in front of Vega, poking her tiny horns and letting her poke his, which are similar.

Saying something about it being rude for a demon princess to have to walk, he picks her up, and after placing his mantle around her, he carries her as we continue on our way.

It is only a few days later when we find the last of my subminds here. He is simply sitting on the stairs, looking down into the volcano. It is he who mapped out this place to make it understandable for us and created a path.

He is fully covered in dense, delicate tattoos, and the scars I carry are even more visible on him.

Standing there, all my subminds and I look at Sophie at the same time, and she gives a short nod.

As if in reaction to that, the presence around us increases, causing Sophie to groan in pain while my subminds disappear one after another. Before going, each of them gives a short pat, poke, or hug to Vega, who allows them to do so and says her own goodbyes.

When I take the next step, nerves stretch over my skeleton, followed by veins, tendons, and flesh that then become encompassed by my skin. Clothes appear on me at the same time most of my body finishes regenerating, and hair grows from my head. Each of my scars appears on my skin, causing Vega to touch my hand and caress one of them.

Finally capable of it, I also offer a smile and ruffle her hair. “Sorry for bringing you into all of this.”

She determinedly shakes her head. “It made me happy, master. Very.”

“I see.” I let go of her and step toward Sophie. “I will be relying on you to finish this pincer movement from the outside. And… I'm sorry about those memories.”

“Don't be stupid. We will make new ones. You know... I always hated that it's only you sacrificing yourself. It makes me feel like trash. Now do your stuff, and I'll do mine. And it was nice to see you, Vega.”

Shorter than my disciple, Sophie stops in front of her, rolling her eyes but smiling in the end as Vega pats her head.

“An asshole to the last moment, just like her master,” Sophie mutters with a smile, and disappears.

Just as her presence is gone, I grab Vega’s hand and pull her close to me. Without Sophie here stabilizing this place, everything turns into a huge mess.

The magma below us explodes, streams of it shooting through the hollow column. All the rules Sophie kept up, even as the space was degrading, now begin to break.

Out of nowhere, a skyscraper grows from the stairs near us. Cars begin to fall from the sky. The temperature rises greatly before plummeting just as drastically. Huge monsters climb out of the shadows, walking on the walls and breathing fire at us while I jump around and begin to defend against it all.

I boost us toward the hollow center of the volcano, dodging a stream of magma before diving toward the presence below. With Sophie gone, it awakens further, opening a single eye. Though I can barely make out the shape of its body, an incredible power radiates from within it.

Then, it launches an attack on us. A huge skeletal limb of an animal I cannot recognize reaches out, growing from that unidentifiable shadow and stretching to squash us. Every part of that skeletal arm is covered by the very same barrier that covers the kaiju outside on the 12th floor of the tutorial, only much, much stronger.

I smile at Vega, and she laughs as I hold her in front of me and in the path of the arm while the air and streams of magma pass by us.

I am confident in my theory, absolutely sure of it, enough to allow Vega to help me in this way. Yet, for a moment, a thought flashes through my mind: If she dies, if something happens to her, I will follow her without trying to save my life. For betraying that trust.

The moment that skeletal arm touches Vega, the barrier around it disappears. The hand that touches her crumbles, and the presence roars in pain.

It is as simple as that. Vega has been brought here through a communication token that creates a shared mental space for us, and until the token runs out and she returns to her planet, she is under System protection.

And the System doesn't like such an abuse of the rules.

You have been given a second warning.

Next Chapter

Comments

Levi

Early chapter release? Let's fucking gooo!!

Moonfrost

Cerim is the kind of author where if there's an early chapter I'm not thankful but rather considering what sort of nefarious scheme this could be a part of.

KooZnack

What an asshole system. A warning? Why is Mana Daddy getting warned for something that was clearly done by Diligence?

KooZnack

Do we remember him getting a 1st warning or has the Mana Daddy redacted that from our memory?

Florin Cojocaru

Does the system work in groups of 3 or 14?

Tercius

Vega Smash god xD i Love it !

Nemesis

Corgi-erberus, the guard of the most wicked prison!

Andrew

Thank you!

Sithaari

Ooooh so keen for more

Nemesis

What is a warning? Can you trade it for cash value? Does it taste good? 😜

Nemesis

He wanted to make us realise, just a little sooner, that all those happy normal memories for Izzy they made in this simulation, the ones Sophie pushed herself so hard to give more time for. Sophie wont remember any of it.

Quellcrist

What caused the first system warning? I can’t seem to remember or find any info

Nemesis

After freeing Lissliss and finishing floor 11 one of his rewards was a warning

Nemesis

After freeing Lissliss and finishing floor 11 one of his rewards was a warning

Nemesis

So Sneaky paid by offering the deer jerky. Sophie showed sacrifice by giving up those memories, and Nat showed determination by forcing himself to kill a simulated Biscuit ☹️

Moonfrost

Nat got the first warning along with his 11th floor quest rewards, it was most likely from his role in freeing Liss, and maybe also from assisting in reviving Starless Sky.

Valence

TFTC! What a devious albeit demonic tactic

Val the mysterious Jedi

Yo system sounds like a DM that didn't expect the bard to roll a hard 20 for his bs wish and kod the final boss with some nonsense

Mapthaniel

it appears I was missed during this this time in the mental space, everybody was lost

I Is Patron

A warning from the system. So what? Its bound by rules and it cant take anything away from Nat. An eradication quest to kill him. So what? Greed will protect him during the tutorial and Starless Sky will protect Earth for a 100 more years. Go forth Mana Daddy and abuse the system like the bitch that it is.

Memelord Steambath

I feel like these are perfectly normal behaviors of an average tutorial taker if u ask me 🤷‍♂️

Memelord Steambath

I wonder if she will get xo for killing a demigod...jeez this group is wild

Blaxxun

I was wondering whether he brought her in because Liz, Ruby or the God were protecting her somehow. But the system, because of the token, makes far more sense now.

ZAC_Daddy

Where is Assholethaniel? *edit: okay it’s addressed - it’s being redacted by Redacthaniel or hidden by Sneakthaniel

Edmund Dillon

Tftc!!!! Minion shield is a good idea😂😂

John

Nat's Warning collection is impressive, mabye he could invite ruby over to his place to show them to her ;)

I need more strength stuff future me

Wasn’t his first warning during the first floors of beyond against forget his name but the kinetic dude like when he abused the token to live against him?

Austin Barton

No that wasn’t a warning that was nat seeing a flaw that the system hadn’t patched yet and if I remember right the next time he tried to do that in the mana chasing sand desert it didn’t work. This is nat using an existing rule to help him when the system doesn’t want him to. Like with Liss on floor 11. I could be wrong about why the first one wasn’t a warning but what you are thinking of wasn’t actually a warning but a quick patch to the system after a flaw that wasn’t seen.

Budgie

When he gets the 3rd can Christoph Waltz say "Thats a Bingo"

Doug

The first warning happened on chapter 889, for those not aware of it.

Ivan Jelenić

Didn't Nat sacrifice his arm too?

Ivan Jelenić

It could reduce future rewards, or limit his choices.

Kirin085

This has to be the Cerim fent arc

granndfunk

Wow that was a bitch move sacrifice by Sophie. What a terrible person.

Andika Pratama

After reviving starless sky and freeing lissliss in sequence to be exact

Nemesis

I don't think so. The Corgiberus demanded 3 things to pass. Payment, sacrifice, and determination. Nat was about to do the sacrifice when Sophie beat him to it. Its why he was so angry at her. I also think she did it because, as he mentioned, the loss of the arm may have been permanent (even outside), or at least beyond their ability to heal short-term

Quellcrist

I don’t remember the system having a reaction to starless sky’s revival

Quellcrist

That was more a warning from greed that the system would not react well to being abused and will change things

Quellcrist

That was more a warning from greed that the system would not react well to being abused and will change things

Sean

I don’t think he was mad at her but for her.

Madje Tobi Marc'Avent Tchona

According to that logic…. When Lissandra had first summoned Nat in their first training bout after the first tournament and she threatened to kill him if he didn’t level up his skills and all that…. Nat was in no danger at all?

Gio

It's logocal that Vega would be protected, but why did the kaiju get damaged?

Arch Fiend

I mean sure she gave up the memories and it sucks butt she is a mind mage even if she didn't have her own memories of the time she could get eveyone else's if she wants them and ask for them even just getting Izzie's, she doesn't need to get their emotions attached to the memories.

im Panda

Mapthaniel was the one sitting on the stairs in the bottom of the volcano

Alex

omg i loved the chapter, and the last system notif. Nat is cumultating the warnings even without taking the empyrean class 😭 how many warning will he get before the last one when he plans to mess up the system to fuck up the Fraud the first part wasnt easy to read, i felt everything.. thx for the chappie ! makes me love hdt more and more <3 and what nat will get after messing with a demigod ? damnnn

Gardor

Is the system saying Nathaniel has gotten his second warning or the demigod? Is the warning for Nate exploiting the "system protection", or for the demigod attacking someone protected by the system?

Tommy Hennessy

Do y’all think he’s the only one taking advantage of the system, or he’s one of the few that’s doing it so effectively?

Nate 3000

Nat got the warning - he wouldn't have seen it if it was to the demigod

Gardor

Ah, guess that's my fault for assuming the author would just put a system notification not seen by the MC in the narrative. Er...a system notification from outside the MCs perspective when in the MCs POV. Whatever you get what im trying to say.

Kirin

Thank you for the chappie!

Nate 3000

No worries! The demigod did miss the warning about walking into Nat's head but he's about to figure it out next chapter! 😁

Kaladin

Is it 3 strikes and your out? Is this a system warning or a tutorial warning? (In a year will it be reset once he's out of the tutorial) Do we have any idea the consequences from the system: bounty, reduced rewards, handicap, imprisonment, etc?

Gwiddion

We dont know what will happen. Most likely it will while he is in the tutorial it will remove or reduce his rewards by a lot. Though as it is giving warnings i could also see it marking him as an enemy of the system. As he has after the third and most likely last warning Abused and moved against the system. It probably wont be a eradication quest where the slayer gets a skill of his, but some kind of reward in form of combination token or other rewards i can see.

Gwiddion

my guess is he isnt the only one. As Ruby kinda confirmed it when he used his beyond tokens on the 7th floor to dodge the camp enforcer. It probably is the scale to which he abuses the rules or moved against the system. When he helped Lissandra it wasnt so much that he used a rule loophole but more that he was a essential piece of help for her escape. This time he is basically using the system to fight an entity that is most likely on the uper absoltue powerscale when fully awoken. It was never intended for them to kill the demigod. They would kill/destroy at least 1 possibly more kaijus to stop the ritual they where performing. And he just really hurt this demigod by swinging vega into its attack. like she is a Hammer. Again the scale is of the charts.

Tommy Hennessy

Yeah I figured as much myself. The system lets people get away with some things, but others are literally too much

Nemesis

I only just got the joke. Without his subminds, Nat was bare bones! As in, he was running on the bare minimum resources

Matthew Statz

The first time I read through this chapter, I 100% read it as the system giving a warning to the demigod for abusing Vega, and I was completely on board. Lol

Oguz Kilcan

I don't think so. In the training floor, it was possible for diciples to die. Dennis or Aaron had theirs die on them for example. Nat was there as Liss' diciples, so he could actually die.

Gristle Tock

Can’t wait for a Funko to save the day. I hear the author loves them and is talking ideas for designs. And especially cool ones to buy for himself

granndfunk

So many things to sacrifice and she sacrifices memories of her sister? That's insane. Maybe if it was an older sister, but a younger sister that she looks after? Wow. Heartless.

Fdrugc

How was Vega being a asshole? Why did Sophie leave

Jack Dandy

It's only a matter of time till the system wide eradication quest nat. Vegas gonna love it