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With just two days remaining until the tournament, I make my way through Megacity as I visit Crimson Forge, the biggest of the auction houses, and the guild headquarters. I leave some messages to be sent to Duncan and Lochi on the second floor and also meet with Talon and the vice guild master. I even run into Fiona and Vesta, who are currently taking a break in Beyond.

Being unable to resist spending some time with the forbidden salamander, I accept an invitation for tea from the crazy Duchess.

During the tea, I observe the S rank and her bond, thinking of Biscuit and how he might be doing currently. Still, I do not think there is any Beyond quest to take me to meet him, so for now, I try to drop these thoughts to the background.

From Duchess Fiona, I listen to rumors about what the Replica of the Last Elf was up to and how much of a commotion he caused. For the most part, he actually did nothing egregious other than pissing off people by just existing. However, those same people would sacrifice their firstborn just for an opportunity to kill him for the reward of the eradication quest.

This cycle of the tutorial continues to be the most fucked up in a long while. We have Lissandra escaping alongside the one winged wyvern, Pride clearing Beyond floors, Adrian's rebirth, Calvorn being taken out of Beyond to Brich's planet, and the Wraith being on Earth with Adrian. Not to mention The Boys, Myrra, Starless Sky, the stigma on Vic, and likely a few other things. It is like once such things begin to happen, it all continues to compound until it grows into a truly glorious mess.

After the tea, I notice that there are some people, be it attendees or locals, staring at me. None of them approach me or do further scans other than the usual ones that are considered polite.

These people do seem to recognize me. Due to my usual style of clothing, my eyes, and likely the fact that no mana can be sensed from me, these seem to be well known facts at this point. Though, as of late, I have gotten myself into wearing longer sleeved shirts, hoodies, or jackets.

Not seeing my slimed down body does not change anything, but subconsciously it feels more comfortable. I would not say that I am ashamed of it or take it as a weakness. Even as I am now, as I walk through the city, I am confident I could wipe the floor with almost anyone here. Plus, there are scars on my face and neck too, and it is not like I am hiding those. Feelings are just weird like that.

Still, despite the changes to my body, despite how I look currently, or how many scars I carry, I have never been more powerful.

With my evolved trait, my mana continues to hum inside of my body. It is compressed within it, and I am able to store so much, using my body almost akin to the crown that used to float over my head to act as a mana battery. I just continue to gather more and more mana. I cycle it constantly, and my trait stores and concentrates it.

All of it became even simpler after the [Mana Manipulation] level up and trait evolution. And best of all, I think if I want, I can just dump all that gathered mana out, either letting it explode omnidirectionally or try to aim it. I even think it would not put much strain on me, as my evolved vessel seems to allow it.

As for the part mentioning a biological reactor, my Mana Heart is generating mana faster. It is not to the point of a Regenerator attribute upgrade, not even close, but faster enough for me to notice.

But there is a part about the trait that excites me the most, the part about the inner volume being bigger than it might seem from the outside. Yes, it applies to mana only, but even then, it is just yet another thing to take inspiration from.

Between this evolution and the talnium I studied, maybe I will get my hands on a spatial cache one day, and then I will truly start messing with spatial compression.

The last day before the tournament, I visit the Doc, delivering more barrels to him and taking some from him for my tree, and that is mostly it. As always, I quickly escape before he remembers he wants to lock me in his bunker, and I make my way to the tutorial's 12th floor, where I teleport Lily and myself towards where group 4 is located.

I do it through the [Weave] that is part of the sky, akin to the Veil on the floor where I met my minion. The [Weave] just lights up for my eyes, nearly impossible to see for anyone other than people with great senses. Then we move over the distance of an entire continent with my mana reserves supplying the teleportation requirements easily.

As per usual, I find my place by the side, creating a thermal cube that imitates a campfire to perfection, complete with the smoke that just cannot be missing.

Watching them, I wonder how many shards they currently have. I know that the ones with access to Beyond have been selling the kaiju's parts there. Taking into consideration that kaiju are enormously huge, there is a lot to sell.

Well, in the end, it is simple, with Lily likely being the richest as she dabbles a little bit in healing. She has also been selling some items charged by the Demigod's heart the same way as me. That heart is now about half the size, so it is not the size of a van anymore.

Seeing her so often sitting near it with baby Kindness nearby is quite scary, though.

Still, killing kaiju is not simple, and I know the others spend weeks and months planning different attacks on each and every single one of them, which continue walking towards where we took the Demigod's body out of the water.

It is a bit of a proud moment to see that the portals to the 13th floor are still there, nearby, yet everyone remains greedy for a little bit more experience and achievements from these huge monsters that I know most tutorial attendees cannot even hope to touch.

They grew up so fast.

All of this changed them a little too, and I think not having a healer or me nearby allowed for some of that growth. But, in the end, they are lunatics, the same as everyone in Hell Difficulty. I have seen it.

Maya using her [Armament] to punch kaiju in the face, Min-Jae improving on his Orbital-Dino-Killer-Annihilator-Meteor-9000, Tess and her near invisible and too fast to avoid piercing projectiles, Sophie mind-controlling a kaiju momentarily, Izzy summoning a mile wide and tall wall of flames, and Dennis and Aaron moving in bursts nearly comparable to Tacita while creating illusions of entire cities that lure the kaiju.

And of course, Noodle becoming a giant snake for a minute, able to keep a form matching a kaiju, and Blackie continuing to prove that he possessed the body of a demon Champion with an especially powerful and fucked up trait.

I have found myself in bad company, but the weak, impressionable me at this point cannot escape, so I just have to endure until someone saves me.

They throw a few lame jokes my way, so I return with some of my own, and the ones that do not laugh find themselves caught in a suddenly increased amount of smoke from the cube. Even if they complain, it is not like I can do anything about it. My cubes work on a dark algorithm that even I cannot see into, so it has to be a coincidence. Or the wind.

Their coughing is music to my ears.

When the sky turns dark, I increase the lighting output of the cube, training as I always do, right up until the last moment when the notification appears in front of every one of us.

Congratulations on completing your 4th year in the tutorial!

The final tournament preparations have been concluded.

During the duration of the tournament, all Floor quests will be put on hold.

The tournament will have a 14-day duration, and you can decide to participate or not.

More information will be given after entering the tournament floor.

And as usual, one more message.

Would you like to participate in the final tournament of Earth's tutorial?

Yes/No

Group 4 members disappear one after another, and I remain sitting there last.

Where they were laughing, present just a few moments ago, the place is entirely empty and quiet, with the silence interrupted only by the cracking of my thermal cube.

Please decide in the following 30 seconds if you would like to join the tournament.

Another notification appears, and I still give it some time, looking around and taking in this mood of a suddenly quiet place.

Only when the last seconds tick down do I stand up, and I then accept the invitation. Instantly, I get pulled out of the 12th floor in the way the system likes to do.

I find myself in a quiet forest during the sunset, the golden hour, as the last rays of light pass through the crowns of the trees and a breeze gently passes through.

There are many notifications, but a few points catch my interest the most.

First, it is impossible to die during the events or outside of the events during the entirety of the tournament.

Second, there are five events everyone can participate in and five subevents that you can participate in when you are outside of the main five events in the common area.

And third, apparently due to various interferences, modifications have been made to the tournament. The biggest one being that instead of ten planets from one sector, there will now be ten sectors participating.

All for a total of one hundred planets present during this tournament.

POV Althor

Althor and his tutorial group sit in darkness and silence. There are ten of them, with most of them being Beyonders as well. They are velnar from a rural, dark, and cold area of their planet who got summoned to the tutorial together.

Each of them, since birth, was taller and stronger than the usual velnar, even before the tutorial. They hold the remains of a bloodline that differentiated them from other people on their planet. And that bloodline is now partially awakened, brought to the surface as more than just the slight physiological differences from before the tutorial.

That person, that voice they had only ever heard from the darkness, had done that. Torturing their bodies and minds while strengthening what was already inside, not caring for the consequences to the velnar. After each session, they became just a little stronger, and after each session, their lives got cut just a little shorter.

All just because of that one shard.

And now that dark voice speaks to them, for the last time.

“Burn this into your minds. Your desires, your futures, your very lives are entirely irrelevant. You exist solely as instruments of my design. If you fail your task, I will destroy your planet and your entire population. I will extract every ounce of suffering from your people, from every woman, man, kid, or unborn child. Their screams will become the only record your civilization ever leaves behind.”

Even now, the ten velnar sit there in silence, their eyes empty, but listening to that voice.

Speaking louder now, the darkness surrounds the velnar, pressing in on them and filling them with a fear that makes their limbs shake, and their insides scream.

"Survival will be your greatest curse. If you make it through this, I will forcibly heal your broken bodies just to spend the next several millennia breaking them again. I will introduce you to agony you lack the capacity to comprehend. Make no mistake, all of you will die. I care little if you are slaughtered during the tournament, if your hearts explode, or if you survive just to spend millennia in my care."

Even now, none of the velnar say anything. They are all tall and muscular, and their skin has a red tint to it. It is almost imperceptible, but it is there. And there, inside each of them, is something else, something foreign. A core planted by the dark voice.

“Because of that one shard,” that voice spits out the words, “after all I did to get where I am. I could be a Ruler of any other subclass, yet I remained to observe him, to learn from him! And all I get are scraps, a lesson, a training method thrown at me once in a while. Still, I was content with that, I was happy. Competing with the others, killing them as we fought for his attention. I liked knowing each of us could destroy the trash that dares to call themselves a Ruler nowadays.”

The velnar begin to shake, knowing to expect pain when the voice talks like this, and that pain comes. They twitch, they open their mouths in soundless screams, but they do not let out a noise. They long since learned not to, in order not to anger the voice more.

“So, dear Althor, you and your group will kill that trash. You all will die while doing so, and I will set a stage for you to perish gloriously while serving my will. Do not fret about the changes the system made to this tournament. Do not worry about the Rulers. This is my part, and I will take care of it. So tell me, what will you do?”

All of the velnar shout at once, “We will kill Nathaniel Gwyn!”

Next Chapter

Comments

Isaac Lung

“Ruler of any other subclass” even kindness and charity?

I Is Patron

This guy clearly chose the wrong subclass. He was always meant to be an Envy not Pride. Scared lil bitch. Claims he can take down Rulers but is too scared to kill an Attendee

Armanen Tetempayard (edited)

Comment edits

2026-10-29 19:00 Empty chapter, no point making a chap about nothing.
2026-10-30 09:00 Empty chapter, no point making a chap with only 500 word or so that actually talk about something. And for all people who saying im a hater I love this novel with all my hearth that why im pissed when chapters are like this. And before y’all use excuses, I know and understand the point of light chapter, transitionary chapter etc,I just think it’s possible to even make those enjoyable which is somethings cerim do normally. Like if we add a bit of groupe 4 advancement or pov. A little discussion about the weather and all that, between group 4 members I would actually like this chapter more.
2026-10-29 09:05 Empty chapter, no point making a chap with only 500 word or so that actually talk about something. And for all people who say im a hater I love this novel with all my hearth, that why im pissed when chapters are like this. And before y’all use excuses, I know and understand the point of light chapter, transitionary chapter etc,I just think it’s possible to even make those enjoyable which is somethings cerim do normally. Like if we add a bit of groupe 4 advancement or pov. A little discussion about the weather and all that, between group 4 members I would actually like this chapter more.

Empty chapter, no point making a chap with only 500 word or so that actually talk about something. And for all people who say im a hater I love this novel with all my hearth, that why im pissed when chapters are like this. And before y’all use excuses, I know and understand the point of light chapter, transitionary chapter etc,I just think it’s possible to even make those enjoyable which is somethings cerim do normally. Like if we add a bit of groupe 4 advancement or pov. A little discussion about the weather and all that, between group 4 members I would actually like this chapter more.

Nemesis

Damn cults these days...

Michael Williams

They will try to kill Nat. But he is probably going to paint the walls with them. Its going to be so good to read! Also, holy time skip batman, we have sped through to the tournament! Thanks Cerim

Isaac Lung

I think someone from G4 is gonna die and that's gonna send him over the edge

Samowek

Agreed, just a build up for tomorrow's cliffhanger. Hate to see it ;(

Armanen Tetempayard

Yeah like he would’ve said all that and only used like half a chapter really.

Max Vidal

By all the corgi overlords! Dark lord 666 opens up with his classical move, dark monologue to his wretched and cursed minions ! Cue in disney music please ! "... In the dark of the night..."🪈🪉🎹

Konrad Pagacz

Disagree, we are being introduced to a new villain, a new plot to kill Nat, it creates tension. The whole chapter is creating tension for what's to come. As a literary tool, this is well executed!

FuzziPeach

I think this is one of the pride fanboys that got pissed at the supposed bet pride placed on Nat

Armanen Tetempayard

Like I said could’ve done the same things why only using half a chapter for it instead of the whole chapter being a whole lot of air and the last 300-500 word being about this mysterious antagoniste.

Kirin

Thank you for the chappie!

Augustus

I agree if he had chosen envy he could have experience the full spectrum of events an envy ruler gets to experience in full. Unfortunately as he is in the pride category the experience of growing, begging for scraps and attention, joy at seeing his boss killed, joy at becoming a ruler, fun of bothering the mana daddy/cockroach/greed, the humiliation of steaming your first fight and losing, and finally, the but clenching terror of death. As a Pride master he is not going to get the joy of being a ruler, so sad.

nick gibbons

dont forget about greed and possibly wrath

Lucas Tristram

He's prideful duh, he probably couldn't become a ruler

Isaac Lung

greed and wrath aren't really in the same category

Margrave Fel

"Lets cram as many timeskips and as many plot points into a single chapter as possible, and not flesh out any one of those, that is a good trick!" ... this chapter feels hollow, as if halfheartedly checking off a list of previously hinted at subplots each worth its own chapter, just to be done with them

frankie doerr

Brother there is no tomorrow chapter we wait two days

Mapthaniel

it's always a matter of reading just one chapter. If I wake up in the morning and the chappie is this one I'm a bit disapointed. For the whole story? It makes more sense. I hate waiting :(

frankie doerr

True but cerim has been writing this story for years as much as we want him to tell about each and everything that is happening it’s a lot to plot out and even though it seems rush right now I trust that he’s just hurrying the plot along to something that he’s been planning and hinting at for months now since the elf beyond quest

Armanen Tetempayard

Even has a whole chap like this can’t even be considered filler. A chapter average word count is between 1600 and 1800, he only used around 300-500 word to present this new vilain and the 1000+ are basically just empty air.

Armanen Tetempayard

Over the edge of what exactly ? He already at the edge of everything be it power, mental health, suicidal behaviour like I don’t see one things he isn’t putting his all in.

Eike M

"slimed Body" how kinky

Margrave Fel

I think getting paid over 30k a month from patreon alone to write this story, would be incentive enough to not skip subplots he himself has set up or hinted at, no?

Cam

Bro it’s a book you have to have the lows so you can have the highs. If you want the go go go all the time you end up with half the trash on royal road

Armanen Tetempayard

Never said that it should be all action and brainless, im saying that this particular chapter was literally empty, no discussion between groupe 4, no update on his chestplate or Dili reaction to seeing demigod body part on auction etc, im never against low im story because I know they are needed but again there is a big difference between a light chap and an empty chap.

Bandit General

Honestly Cerim, I was expecting this type of chapter. I’m not even mad. You didn’t tell us anything about the chest plate, didn’t tell us if the mana tree is finished, and we got a cool but not so cool upgrade trait…….On a daily basis Cerim loves to dangle the hype in our face and get us excited to just destroy our joy.

Alexander

What exactly do you think is missing? The "subplot" of Nat talking with fiona? Of yet another talk with the doc about how he wants to dissect Nat as if we didn't have that 100 times already? Seriously what is there that was skipped over that wasn't already written a bunch of times already?

Gingerswimmer

I’m a little confused. In the previous chapter Nat mentions showing the tree to G4 members but in this chapter he mentions using weave to travel across the continent. Did he show them in beyond?

Jared Jobbins

He still refuses to use Black mana to it's full potential...

Jared Jobbins

What did he skip? All he did was the equivalent of going to grab groceries, and I was always annoyed when he didn't skip those scenes

mulchymulcher

That's all it is, really. If they actually had any pride, they would kill Nat personally and endure the consequences personally. No wonder Pride barely took an interest

Jared Jobbins

It's a transitionary chapter, not every single chapter can have interesting over the top things. We already got a reaction from Dilligence last chapter, and I doubt he missed the obvious body of a demigod when he was cursing at Nathaniel for his fucked up trait evolution. We've had like 2 updates on the chest plate and his hidden skill since they were revealed, they appear to be part of a separate chapter Ark so there is no reason to bring it up every 5 seconds. Nathaniel did nothing interesting in 2 days, and it would have been awkward to just suddenly be like "here's a surprise start to the tournament b*tchs", because it was obvious that this chapter wasn't going to be that chapter, and it would have felt rushed. Even if you disagree, I beg you be a bit nicer, I've seen a lot of authors like our amazing Cerim become stressed and burned out because of a hypercristical fanbase :(

cerim

Naaah, no worries. This isn’t something that would stress me - i long since got used to this sort of comments. I have fun and enjoy even these sortnof build up chapters and im in fortunate position where i can write what i enjoy

Jared Jobbins

Thank you, it was hurting my soul, but I guess it could also give good pointers at times

blaw

Without those hints at the crazed Pride fan, I would be miffed if we would get rug pulled in the tournament chapters with stuff like "yeah, the nobodies from last tournament are somewhat strong now, completly suicidal without reason and can kill people although that is against the rules". Nope, this foreshadowing is imho much better than having a flash back chapter that explained afterwards why people and circumstances were crazy afterwards.

Armanen Tetempayard

I promise you he will be okay (making around 20k per month does that to people) just because someone isn’t happy about something won’t really impact him at all, these author your talking about mostly are wither unsuccessful which clearly isn’t the case for cerim over here, or tricked and underpaid by their editor which again dosen’t seems to be a problem for him, I’ve started this série around two years ago and spent entire night theorising about the potential evolution of each character, so I do love this book I just find it pointless to chapter almost completely empty.

Armanen Tetempayard

Like I said above that’s only 15%-20% of the total chap.

Lizy Flore

What’s all this whining in the comments ? Y’all sound like overgrown children incapable of regulating your emotions. Have a little bit of patience, would you ? You’ve read more than nine hundreds and fifty chapters of this story, you can wait a few more days for your adrenaline and dopamine shots

Wolven

Oh no, a set up chapter explaining the threats more, whatever will we do.

Wolven

I mean they are (assumedly) masters of pride for a reason haha, even if that means saying dumb stuff cause I doubt any of them could even keep up with greed or wrath either from what we’ve heard of them.

granndfunk

Bit of a clunky chapter

Armanen Tetempayard

Like I said previously only ~25% of the chap is used to talk about this new interesting threats the rest is just empty.

granndfunk

Good lord. "Overgrown children incapable of regulating your emotions"? You sound completely insufferable. People are just not super positive about something, and you jump to this? I don't see a single comment that's whining. People are negative, yes, but that's allowed. You can criticize here. We're paying customers. Cerim doesn't need your protection, and you don't need to act like some bastion of morality just because some people didn't like the chapter. Also, isn't the "issue" the complete opposite? You think people want "adrenaline and dopamine shots" but it seems like most comments are wanting him to SLOW DOWN and go through some of these things mentioned in the chapter. God, I am so sick of toxic positivity.

Kradish

Seems to be a master of self delusion more than pride

Jim Butler

I think the tree and the chest plate aren't really for this tournament. I feel like he's trying to keep those things under wraps until he has to face off against Adrian.

Mr.Sir

Lmao bud hasn't read the comments. Literally top comment is being whiny for "empty chap" dude you've had 950 chapters to understand how this author writes good lord bro. Also the payment is 100% completely optional, and while I get that a stubbed chaps are behind a pay wall that does apply to us at all as im sure everybody here has read the chapters before. Truly if you're that butthurt do the free version instead of being a pseudo armchair psychologist in the patreon comment section.

Mr.Sir

Oh no be careful here comes a mean 1 plot point and an event you've known was coming for at least 100 chapters. So hollow, no way the author could be setting up a major event that will impact the plot in an important way. Also dude this was going to come eventually its not like cerim can skip the transition chapter and just be like "we are in the tournament". Literally a non issue and you've had 950 chapters to understand how the author would've gone about doing this chapter its not like transition chapters just didn't exist before now.

Andika Pratama

500 > 15% > 20% > 25% Is this homage to Nat's delusion of how long he stays in thought acceleration?

granndfunk

THAT'S what you think is whining? Oh, wow. Okay, we have completely different definitions of the word.

granndfunk

Also, thank you for proving my point. "if you're that butthurt" Are you 12?

David Vieira

Not really? I mean we already knew that he gave Althor a weapon to kill Nat during the tutorial.. we barely learned anything new in the whole chapter.

TBONEMAN

Group 4 are all weirdos. Luckily they have Nat so they have a chance to learn about being normal.

Name1

I think the chapter complainers are ignoring that Cerim’s writing a book and not a patreon story. The patreon delivery timing creates the cliffhangers, but imagine how different all the chapters would be if he didn’t have to think about what he could fit within 5 chapters to make the week feel better and rounded vs just overall story flow?

Golijat

They will kill Nathaniel Gwyn? The chance of them being able to kill Nat who is fully Champion grade and is probably mid to upper Champion grade is extremely low. Even if the Pride subclass Absolute super charged their growth to give them Champion level strength they would still lack the knowledge and mastery over their skills, traits and bodies that Champions possess. Nat could probably take them all on while being restricted to a lower floor. The only thing they will be killing is their hopes and dreams of beating Nat.

Andrew

Thank you!

Sergei Hartwig

In a book my Brain would just skip over it and read on. But with chapter based Reading.. maybe you could intruduce more Planets and Drop the dark one in the end. So its a lot of words for „nothing happen as we wait for the turnanemt to start“

Gutz

Bro he's got to make a living too, just bare with it. Don't get too impatient, the story is still topnotch anyway. I just hope this style of chapters will not be a disaster in a book format.

Fdrugc

Tftc that person should choose Envy. Are the cubes Nat was using rip offs of Lissandra's mana spheres. Any guesses in how much more stuff they'll get by killing all the kaju?

D'Andre James

when did pride place a bet on nat

Armanen Tetempayard

An average novel chapter is around 1600-1800 word, so yeah 300-500 word of interesting stuff is about 15-25% of a chapter.

M Schweibold

If you want to get pissed, read Zogarth’s 12 chapters for one fight with one of those chapters dedicated to winding up for a punch…and his Patreon is $90,000/month..

Armanen Tetempayard

He make around 26k a month I think he can be considered well of bro 😂

Armanen Tetempayard

I will trust you on that, im not angry he make money I really like his creation, it’s just that people are defending him like one criticism will drive him to do sepuku and he will end up homeless.

Shawn Treants

Its a book. Meant to be read as a whole. whining about 1 chapter being a bit more chill than normal is simply ridiculous. Maybe time to stop and realize you are paying to read advanced chapters of a whole book. Maybe go read an actual book and understand that they ebb and flow and not every chapter can be a banger. It was a good chapter that set things up for the future. Your complaint is just ridiculous

Daniel Velasco

What's the shard they're talking about?

LessWronger

Hey, do you all think Oarfish are cool? I think they are cool. Swimming vertically? Very cool. Silver and red? Cool! Longest bony fish on earth? Cool! Harbringer of disaster? Coooool! Historical legend of the sea serpent since Aristotle? Damn!

Kaladin

Everyone here are 4th year Hell difficulty attendees, right? A percentage will be beyond members but they should all be the same year as Nate. Any noteworthy individuals we would have heard of already. My guess is it will be 99 worlds versus Earth.

Kaladin

They don't seem to have the personality of prides: "all I get are scraps, a lesson, a training method thrown at me once in a while. Still, I was content with that, I was happy...fought for his attention." You're a lackey seeking the attention of someone that will always be better than you not sure how that's pride. On top of that he's torturing newly initiated attendees, giving a ton of attention to the cosmic equivalent of toddlers. Someone's deluded. I see no way this possible absolute it's competent in any manner.

Armanen Tetempayard

Reading comprehension of an oyster over here, I like chill chap like I said above I don’t like empty chap which if you didn’t know are two complety different things. I never asked for banger i just ask not to make people wait just to upload a chap with only 500 word worth of content, while the rest of it is just empty like no discussion between groupe 4, no sweet moment or even discussion of plan nothing just the void.

ibrahim erkeğin

The episode feels a bit sluggish, but I can tolerate it as long as I know the upcoming ones will be great. I just hope you don’t make the mistake of killing off someone from the group purely for shock value only to bring them back later. The series has lost a lot of its seriousness lately; that old sense of dread where anyone could die at any second is gone (not talking about Nathaniel here), but something is definitely missing. Right now, what I miss the most is the era with Nathaniel’s twin—that was perfection. :)"

ForwardArrow

I will say it'd be nice if we got to see a bit more of Group 4 fighting the Kaijus. On Nat's end I really don't think there's much to show but I do feel Group 4 hasn't gotten as much as they could lately and the kaiju hunt would be fun to show off in a little more detail. Really just depends on how much you want to see Group 4's feelings/progression though. I do, but its not the end of the world if I don't get it.

Marwolaeth

Meric liking all the hate comments has me stressed 4th dimensionally

iang

sorry who tf is althor? im lost why does he want the mana tree?

Cody

The singular shard that was placed as a bet on Nat when he was killing the champions for his class upgrade. Everyone that was watching in the room with the Handlers/Rulers, is under the assumption that Pride made that bet

Lizy Flore

Sue me, it annoys me when people don’t like a chapter and make it everyone else’s problem. It also annoys me when people confuse the words « personal opinion » and « professional advice »

Nemesis

An excellent point. Raw power isn't enough

Augustus

The most important question: is biscuit joining? If not I suggest everyone follows Nat's lead and blows smoke at cerim for keeping the burrito blimp from us.

Gwiddion

well we got hints that the disciple of the last elf will be part of the tournament so that is another person of interest.

Gwiddion

ye Nat talked about finishing the chestplate after the tutorial when he is alone on the 13th floor.

John

Is a regenerator upgrade not just doublening it? why does he say it regenerates much faster bus still not even close to the regenerator upgrade????

Gingerswimmer

I wonder how many of them are already shaking in their boots, knowing that the Guild leader of The Primordial Lunatics is coming out to play.

Themo Grulld

Ow my the male karen ´s are strong about this chapter. Please get a grip, just enjoy , that Cerim is on time, like he kept up for 2 Years. Glad to have joined your /our story mate.

Nemesis

He is either rage-baiting them or he has self-loathing issues

Nemesis

Are you sure you read the chapter right? No one said anything about him wanting the tree. And Althor is some guy with a unfortunate compatibility with this shadowy guys bloodline, so they have been turned into pawns to attack Nat. It came up before. Althor may even be one of the guys we had a PoV from during the last tournament

iang

i assumed shard and fragment were the same thing. I guess he's talking about the sunless sky or w/e his name was? I'm still lost

Alex

Remind me who’s is Althor?

Bob

another comment refreshed my memory, the one shard (money) that someone (pride) made on Nat

iang

oh so he lost the bet and now he's mad and wants to kill Nat because he lost the shard in the bet?

Abhishek

Honestly. This chapter was kinda heavy i felt. The way Nat is with his team, heartfelt considering his past, secondly the guys threats were messed up. That fear was real.

Nate El

Don’t like a book or chapter, write a better once yourself. If you can write at 1/10th the speed of Cerim and 1/20th the quality I will be impressed.

Armanen Tetempayard

People like you are the reason author do subpar things, criticism isn’t always meant to be negative, im just stating a fact not insulting the author in any way, aka the reason why he liked my comment.

Casey Baca

No. He's jealous that pride noticed Nat by betting one shard on him. The shards that Nat has millions of. The regular beyond currency. This shadow guy doesn't like Pride paying attention to other people.

iang

thanks for clearing that up

Andika Pratama

Funny that you think that he liked your comment because he really like your comment, instead of a sarcastic wall of shame response..

Armanen Tetempayard

So shamefull to have an opinion and think for myself, ouhhhhh I'm so ashamed 😂😂. What country do you live in for you to like to ride the dick of figure of authority so much ?

Tee

I feel sorry for Althor and his lot. It's got to be super defeating to know that after all youve been through, someone randomly appears and makes you a slave to die for them... and for what? jealously. The most messed up thing is, you cant do shit about it no matter what you try.

Flo Zilla

I still think that the "1 shard bet" was done by Ruby to bait idiots lile him into providing a challenge for Nat.