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Hey, hey! I added a bit more to Chapter 75 - right after Lily's POV. 

I did get some good feedback and after a bit of thinking, I came to agree with it, so I added dialogue between Nathaniel and Ruby where they go over the way Nat killed Emeric. 

I like the contrast between Lily's POV and the dialogue between Nat and Ruby. 

Please, let me know what you think!

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Paper_Link189

It definitely fits with Nate's character and is quite ingenious. It's a good addition.

Xaver Klein

Its a good addition indeed

cerim

All thanks to your feedback :)