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All the Little Lost Boys and Girls, Chapter 69 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-08-17 23:50:22
Imported:
2026-06

Content

No giggity here, I'm afraid. In place, we have the revelation of the Pax Archive and the data that Noble Prize and all aboard her died to preserve. The story of the the fall of the world of Gemini Pax, the loss of every man, woman and child upon it.

Thank you to everyone here for your support and I hope you enjoy this latest entry into the world of All the little lost.... 


Comments

Xpholia

Great storytelling atmosphere as always. Just a comment; how can a night vision camera pick up eyecolour?

Xpholia
>>66236005

Also do I detect a trace of inspiration from "The Thing"? The tendrils spilling from wounds reminds me heavily of that movie. Just a head nod that you can counjure great images with words alone.

Xpholia

Midway through the piece; damn you got my heart rate going 150 and my nerves on edge - this is brilliant!

Xpholia
>>66239341

Finished it. Damn you that was brilliant! I sat on the edge of my seat if you will, that was damn good writing!

Anonymous
>>66236005

The way I read this, the camera didn't pick up eye color, rather just discoloration of the sclera. It's been mentioned a few times earlier that the sclera of the Tainted turns yellowish or red as the infection progresses. Since any discoloration involves a change in the eye's albedo, it would be recognizable even if the actual color is not.