Reworking Suzi's Arc (Patreon)

Hi everyone,

As well as adding a new subplot for Suzi, I'm also reworking some of her existing scenes to better reflect the romantic arc I originally intended.

Suzi's relationship has been the hardest one for me to write. It's taken a lot of thought and careful planning to make it feel believable, and hopefully not frustrating, for the player.

The other romances have their challenges too, like the age and experience gap between the MC and Emma, or Charlotte's trust issues, but emotionally they're more straightforward.

Suzi's arc, on the other hand, involves a love/hate dynamic that I've found difficult to get right. The love triangle with the captain of the male swim team only adds to the complexity.

I think I mentioned before that their romance was meant to be further along by now. But now that I’ve worked everything out, I can say that in the reworked version, Suzi and the MC’s relationship will take a clear step forward by the end of the current content [v0.16].

Thank you for your support,DB