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This small update to 0.16.2 [REWORK] fixes a number of small issues, mainly typos. Full changelog below.

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V0.16.3 CHANGELOGEpisode 03Line 1329: Incorrect speaker — changed from MC to Lucy.Episode 04Line 366: Removed duplicate line of dialogue.Episode 06Corrected three instances of the erroneous phrase "lu Lucy".Episode 08Line 1109: Fixed typo: "incre3dible".Episode 10Corrected two instances where "Kaylah" was used instead of "model".Episode 11Line 1818: Fixed broken phrase — replaced "[em]" with "tell".Line 3448: Added missing word "man".Episode 12Line 1036: Capitalized "I".Line 3393: Removed unnecessary "of" in "few of weeks".Line 3713: Fixed typo — added missing "t" in "I like he way".Episode 13Line 4800: Converted a narrated line to dialogue and adjusted adjacent lines.Episode 15Replaced old images that showed Elena’s arms.OtherUpdated details on the love-interest bio images.Corrected the Save button's hover image.

V0.16.2 [REWORK] CHANGELOG- added quick menu toggle to options screen- added debug info HUD [Press F2 to toggle on/off]- tidied up UI a little- rewritten script with new formatting- renamed all variables- renamed old images using established convention- changed file structure- added about 7 small new Suzi scenes and expanded a couple of others slightly- tried to make v0.1-0.3 dialogue more natural- rewritten numerous other scenes- replaced instances of LAUGH, CRYING, KISS, etc. [may be one or two instances remaining in sex scenes which are due to be updated]- added 2 missing sex scenes- added 360 images- upgraded Emm'a DVD collection to Blu-ray!

Comments

ninad karekar

So is this just a rework of the older one or has the story progressed?

DarkBlue

V0.16.2 [REWORK] was the big rework. So if you already played 0.16.2 then it's not worth downloading this.

TheGermanGuy

loved the rework and the added content for suzy, cant wait until our mc can date her

DarkBlue

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. ❤️

Martin Kleiber

is it possible to implement the Koga mod ?

EHelström

I'm new here and I apologize if this isn't the appropriate place to offer a critique, but I hate discord so I'm putting this here. I just played through the rework of 0.16.2 and wanted to give my thoughts. First some praise. I honestly think this is some of the best character visuals that I've seen. Even if there seems to be a mysterious amount of wind indoors surrounding Charlotte's hair. Honestly, I started really enjoying that aspect and just assumed there was someone paid to hold a fan on her wherever she went. As for the gameplay as a visual novel, well, there is much that the MC decides that should be offered to the player, such as with Detective Carter. I assume that since this is a work in progress it is something that you are working on. If that's the case, then please ignore this paragraph. As for the story, it's not something that I've seen before in a VN and I enjoyed the overall plot. Some repetition as the story goes on. I suspect there are some lines that were missing the ( ) to show the characters were thinking instead of saying things. One example was Carter referring to Emma's date with Zak as being part of a plan. If the MC heard that it should have set all sorts of alarms off. So, I assumed it was Carter thinking to himself and not the MC being a colossal idiot. Overall, I'm interested to see how this develops and I'd definitely would like to see further versions.

DarkBlue

I'm afraid not. Anything that would complicate things for me isn’t something I can consider right now. I'm grateful to KoGa, though. I know a lot of people find it adds value to the game.

DarkBlue

Glad you're enjoying it and thank you for your feedback. I will look into the points you've raised. 👍

Tempilari One

Hi DB, Thanks for the update and I've started a new play through for 0.16.2 and although it might be me but I used to see the hearts in the top left corner when you selected a response that improved your standing with either Charlotte, Emma or Lucy but that doesn't seem to be there thus far and I was wondering if there is something missing or is it just me. Love the more in-depth thoughts and storyline at the beginning of the game, good to hear that Carter's choice of bodyguard was kicked into touch by Lucy... Thought you should know just in case but as I say it might be something I'm missing. Will see if 0.16.3 has it covered. Keep up the good work mate, All the best 👍

DarkBlue

Hi. No it's not you. I removed the heart images, sorry I forgot to tell everyone. When I first started, I was aiming for something more 'gamey', but along the way it has become more serious and story-focused. I didn't feel the heart images fit any longer. Thank you. 😊

RicardoS

Btw....i forgot something very important - HANNAH is super HOT too and i really like her attitude, i hope we going to see a lot more of her !!! 🥰

Tempilari One

Thanks for coming back to me DB and letting me know, apologies for the delay, appreciate the info, keep up the great work 👍 and Merry Christmas 🎄🎅

DarkBlue

Thanks. And a Merry Christmas to you too. 🎅

Willy Arentoft

I get a wierd error when I try to unpack after download to PC, both from Google and Mega: Error 0x80004005 Archive.rpa

DarkBlue

Sorry, Willy, I don't know what the cause might be. This is what Deepseek AI suggested: The error code 0x80004005 is a generic Windows file access error, combined with an issue involving the archive.rpa file in Ren'Py. This is often a file permission or corruption issue, but here are the most likely causes and solutions you can suggest to the user: Most Likely Causes 1. Corrupted or Incomplete Download/Installation - The archive.rpa file may be damaged during download or extraction. - If the game was installed via an installer, the installation might have been interrupted. 2. Antivirus or Windows Defender Interference - Some antivirus software (including Windows Defender) may quarantine or block access to .rpa files, mistakenly flagging them as suspicious. - This can cause the error when Ren'Py tries to read the archive. 3. File Permission Issues - The user may not have read permissions for the file, especially if the game is installed in a system-protected folder (like Program Files). - Running the game as an administrator might help in some cases, but it’s better to install the game in a user folder (like Desktop or Documents). 4. Disk Errors or Bad Sectors - If the file is stored on a failing hard drive or external drive, it might be unreadable. 5. Incorrect Game Files for Platform - If the user downloaded a version for a different OS (e.g., trying to run a Linux build on Windows), the archive might be incompatible. Suggested Fixes for the User You can ask the user to try these steps: 1. Disable Antivirus Temporarily - Have them temporarily disable their antivirus (including Windows Defender real-time protection), then re-extract or reinstall the game. If this works, they should add the game folder to the antivirus exclusion list. 2. Re-download the Game - Suggest they re-download the game from the official source and verify the file integrity (compare file sizes or checksums if you provide them). - If the game is distributed as a ZIP/RAR, ensure they extract it fully (using 7-Zip or similar) and not run it from inside the archive. 3. Move the Game Folder - Move the entire game folder to a simple location like C:\Games\ or the Desktop, away from system folders or cloud-synced folders (like OneDrive). 4. Run as Administrator - Right-click the .exe and choose "Run as administrator" — sometimes this bypasses permission issues. 5. Check Disk for Errors - They can run chkdsk on their drive to check for bad sectors. 6. Update Graphics Drivers - Occasionally, outdated graphics drivers can cause file access errors in games (though rare for Ren'Py). 7. Redistributable Packages - Ensure they have the latest Visual C++ redistributables and DirectX runtimes installed (often included with Ren'Py games, but sometimes missing).

Old dog

I downloaded the saves and installed them in the saved folder with no problems when I loaded them up.

DarkBlue

Thanks, Old dog. I'm glad they worked okay. 👍

Axel Sheffield

just wanted to say. i started reading this story when you first released. I'm glad I found it again and I'm happy to support you in your adventures.

DarkBlue

Thanks, Axel. I'm grateful for your support. 🤗

Old dog

Just had a rerun of the kaylah route and I do like the different sides of the MC that you see with the different ladies.

DarkBlue

Thanks, Old dog. We should see more differences as the romances deepen and the characters have to face their personal issues. 👍

Old dog

kaylah and Selena are very interesting to me as want to see what kind of effect it will have on the MC when they leave him. Charlotte could be interesting as well but does Charlotte really love the MC?Only time will tell I guess.

Jeff

Thanks so much for the progress updates! Truly an emotional, character rich story impossible to ignore. Excited that the next adventure looks like it's around the corner.