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Jarulf

A great release, thanks DB. A nice mix of drama and tender moments and with a few funny ones thrown in, with some renders that really stood out to me, esp one outside the shop with the MC looking at Emma while she is looking through the shop window, and both fore- and background blurred. Loved that one. Also, a perfect transition using sound at one place, a small and simple thing, but used to great effect. I think I'd have liked a few scenes to have been a little longer, a little more dialogue. Mostly where we find the MC and Emma bonding, I'm a sucker for the dad/daughter thing going on there, and can't get enough of 'em. :-) Maybe a few of the transitions were a little jumpy or abrupt. All said, I really enjoyed playing through this, and sorry for the unsolicited critique.

Echo Foxtrot

Great update, now Emma can start the deZakification

MoC

Great update. I loved playing through it. I can't wait for more.

DarkBlue

Always happy to receive critique, thanks. Transitions are something I have struggled with and am trying to improve. And the Emma scenes are my favourite to do. I have to be careful and remember that there are other girls that need screen time too. 🥰

B-52

It was worth waiting indeed ... though I must say I am craving some physically touchy scenes with Charlotte. Please DarkBlue tell me that at least in the next update she will open up to him (at least a little bit) and starting enjoying his company (and I mean also physically enjoying his company...). I mean a little hugging and cuddling in the sauna would be awesome!

Jarulf

Probably a little early for that. 😔 But I'd love a simple touch. Say the MC does something nice for Emma, a small simple thing that somehow gets through Charlie's walls and she melts just a bit. And acknowledges his action with a quick touch on his shoulder. That would be big for her. Have I mentioned that I *really* like the slow pace? 😃 (But not so slow from their perspective)

DarkBlue

Why are you in such a rush? 😁 I'm not sure about hugging and cuddling, but Lucy knows her sister and she clearly thinks Charlotte is ready to open up a little. And it seems as though Charlotte and the MC share some past connection. If they discover what it is then that might draw them closer together.

B-52

Hm I was wondering about that past connection ... twice I think she mentioned he seems familiar to her but she just can´t place it .... let me make a wild guess: he was the one who called the cops when she was attacked and thus saved her live? ... Nah I think that is too much coincidence and drama ...

DarkBlue

No. That wasn't him. But that person may be significant. 😊

Firinity

Another great update and as always leaving me wanting more. Thanks DB for all the hard work you put into this update. Truly excited to see what's next.

B-52

Wow you sure know how to rise my suspension!! Hm let me deliberate further: it could not be Steven either for then he would have known about the attack & the attacker when being asked by the MC ... is it somebody not yet introduced in the game? ... And since I am writing I wanted to ask when exactly in the timeline the attack on Charlotte took place. How many years before the recent events?

DarkBlue

The person is already in the game. And the attack took place 2-3 years ago, around the same time the MC stopped working in Hillside for some reason.

B-52

Now I´ve got it!! Little dead Emma from the past called the cops and saved Charlotte´s life!! Am I right or am I right?! Hahaha...

B-52

Oh shit now it dawns on me - that is the actual reason why she had to die!

DarkBlue

I'm not gonna tell ya! You'll have to wait and see.

B-52

I most certainly shall !