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The MC seeks solace at Steve's bar.

Emma learns about something that Charlotte had hidden from her.

Someone needs a cuddle.

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Abraham

Wow the story really grabs you

Marc Chase

The something might be Charlotte telling Emma about the other Emma and her attack. The last one looks like a caring father figure and a daughter, the 1st one at the bar got me scared if Charlotte kicked him out because of what happened at the end of .11

Pax

I think that Charlotte and Emma will grow even closer to the MC after the events of rev 11. I also think that Suzi will start to warm up to him when she realizes that he saved Emma's life from a maniac. I think one of the interesting changes will be when each of the women starts to act in a more romantic fashion with the MC. Add to this - how will they act when they realize that there may be some romantic competition for the MC's time (his attention early on and his romantic interest later). I think it would be hilarious for Emma to tell Suzi to back off and stop trying to spend time with the MC when he is there to 'protect' Emma. Imagine that mini cat fight, especially when Suzi is not expecting it and would never get into a physical altercation with Emma.

Big Shadow

Kinda thinking Mc's gonna be calling on support from his Mate at the Bar (i would suspect another ex Special forces) to take an active roll in the protection phase . He looks like a good hook up for Lucy . also getting out of his last actions (taking out a cop) is gonna need that special FBI coverup