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Not the biggest fan of this page, it feels really busy. I should probably do my thumbnails with colour and speech bubble placement so I have a better idea of what the final page will look like.

In other news I have been sent editorial feedback for Aerial Magic and stuff is starting to happen and I am excited and yay :D

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Kaiyeti

IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL LOOKING LOOK ITS CREATOR! THANK YOU SO MUCH! *YETIHUG YOU FOREVER! FOREVER!* You are awesome!

Patrick Jackson

First panel is tremendous, I love the zoomed out shot of the location so we have a better idea of the world the story is taking place in.

walkingnorth

Thank you so much! I 'm hoping that doing full-pages panels for chapter covers will be a good way to make myself not be lazy with backgrounds :)

Patrick Jackson

That would be quite unusual for you. I like the alternate version too posted recently which the wisp of cloud rather than the overall haziness.