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Niall Hedderley

I'm with Pimellon: the first seems a little un-specific ;)

Niall Hedderley

And, seeing the continuation text just now, I like how you've done it

walkingnorth

Thank you very much :D I decided I didn't want to break the 4th wall, but I think most of the comedy with the 2nd option came from the word 'shipper' and I was struggling to find a way to rephrase it that I liked. Adding more specificity to the first option seemed like the best choice :)