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If you want to avoid very mild spoilers, don't look at 1b.jpg (or read the script) until after episode... 25 probably?

I decided to leave a certain thought Cecily has until a future scene, and I think it's an emotionally compelling thought so you might prefer to encounter it in the comic, in a scene where I think it'll have the most impact, rather than in a very rough thumbnail, in a scene that I decided was not sufficiently impactful.

This was a tough episode to script - I spent a lot of time staring at a blank page before realizing that Cecily had to go talk to Lachlan before talking to Josette.



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Kaiyeti

It's beautiful and needs to be talked about but gods its an emotional rollercoster. I feel so bad for Cecily being put in this situation&I know she wanted to do right by her son&love but its one of those things that someone everyone will get hurt and you can only hope that they will heal with time. I do hope that they stay together&figure something out but honestly unless Lachlan overcomes his past trauma I don't see a happy ending for Cecily. Thank you for this brilliant chapter Ari my goddess. Also, I know this is going to sound horrible since Lachlan is still and kid so please forgive me but, Lachlan needs to, who do I put this gently, he needs help overcoming his past trauma. I say this because I know for Cecily Lachlan always comes first but so should her own happiness. Cecily Is worried about being vulnerable with other but is vulnerable with Lachlan so she is going to have to tell him, in only my opinion, she WANTS to bring Josette into their family and he is going to have to accept and hopefully over time be okay with it. I know Lachlan was hurt in one of the most horrible way one human can do to another but I hope Cecily and Josette can help him overcome this fear of letting people into what he sees as family. Sigh. I'm sorry if I sound like a jerk. I have just seen something much like this before and it costed my friend a lot of emotional pain.

walkingnorth

You don't sound like a jerk at all! I'm hesitant to comment on anyone's response to the situation (at least until part two of the conversation comes out next week?) but I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm honored that you're thinking so much about my characters. I hope your friend is doing okay :)