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I learned about a different way to get Clip Studio Paint to generate lines from 3D models and tried it out to get a lovely pencil-esque effect. I think this makes my art loser and much more expressive, which is so important for visual storytelling - but it isn't as 'shiny and modern' so it doesn't quite fit the aesthetic I want.

I'm not sure what's more important to me - aesthetic or expressiveness - so I did a test scene with pencil-esque lines and a test scene with crisp lines (both posted below, for ease of viewing on Patreon) and the crisp line test was so much faster, but despite this I think the pencil-esque line test looks more rushed. So I'll be sticking with the crisp lines.

(I am happy to have learned this new way of doing things in CSP and I'll keep this in my mental toolbox for future projects!)

A lot of the art I post for F&F is questionably in character, but the following two scenes are both grabbed from my current scripts. So, everything's in character :)

(Also to clarify the second scene is not a spoiler, F&F is a fake dating romcom.)

I've been told that it's not easy to browse through archives on Patreon, so I've dumped all the F&F art onto google drive:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1jUeSqRvgcJkP_FZPFIafmvbgLYLpZeou?usp=sharing

(It's really interesting seeing all the art in one place. I still really, really like art like: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KXRClDQUwvR-N_tMpurCxWUIpm2MwYSt/view?usp=sharing
But I was told this could be confusing to readers who are scrolling quickly on a mobile, and it needed either to be neater, or to have more contrast, and I found myself doing both. Now I can't see F&F without the brighter colours and the crisp lines - as I said above, I think it's a good aesthetic for the story. But I do hope to do something with this sort of sketchy art style one day!))

(I've mostly been not drawing Tess with a hat because I felt it was important to practice drawing her snakes but realistically, at the start of the story, she wears a hat every time she leaves the house.)

And here are those scene-tests I mentioned above:

Pencil-esque lines

Crisp lines

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Comments

Dyna

Very interesting to see your thought process on this! You're right, clean lines give a more "modern" impression, but I also like pencil lines and that sketchy artsyle was beautiful, I hope you'll make another story with this artstyle! Maybe it would be more suited for a book, and the cleaner, more modern artstyle is better for a webtoon or something like that that readers will read on a small phone screen? Anyways, I can't wait to see more of F&F, all these previews really make me want to read the whole comic!

walkingnorth

Thank you!!! I do love light pencil-ish sketchy lines so very much, and I hope to come back to that on something that's not designed for mobile-phone viewing (a print book? a traditional page-at-a-time webcomic? a visual novel?)

Voyage Goya

I'm late to the party, but I have to say that these two scenes from F&F really leave me hungry for more - I mean, that was already the case with the possibly-less-in-character tests and artworks, but, but, aaaah :D I hope things are going smoothly with Webtoon! (also,I have a very small preference for the pencil-esque design, but that being said it makes it all a bit more ethereal and dreamy, though, instead of modern? And I agree that sharp lines may be easier for scrolling!)