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Ep 35 script (Patreon)

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2016-06-04 15:07:18
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Zen (Marty)

I really like the way the finished product came out... The prose flows better than the original script... :)

walkingnorth
>>1919935

Thank you very much! I often change a lot while thumbnailing, it's much easier to get a handle on the flow of the story when I'm doing the thumbnails :)

Anonymous

I'm the process of catching up on all the things and found myself thinking exactly this. It's so interesting to see how you polish things up. In this particular instance I like the original line "Can you promise me that" better, but everything else in the final version is amazing. And perhaps the final more specific version "...no more secrets" is intentional foreshadowing but the original, imo more sensible line, just resonated with me. Anyway love your work!

walkingnorth
>>3202467

I really liked that line too, I was sad to change it. But alas I decided I needed to shift the emphasis for important foreshadowing reasons (good guess!) And thank you very much :)