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Anonymous

Cements Tess as a likeable character when she gets satisfaction from using her otherness and social disadvantage to help. She completely accepts her place in this world. I wonder if this will change. On the one hand, I'm ok with not fully understanding why gorgons are regarded by some as outcasts - the point might be that she's treated this way through no fault of her own or logical reason, reflecting our own world. But then I'm always ok with mysteries, and most readers, when in a fantasy world, will expect some explanation and a degree of worldbuilding :) Hope the new schedule is working out! Mince pie time...

walkingnorth

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, much appreciated!!! I hope you gets lots of delicious December food to enjoy :D

David Fenger

Ooh, I just noticed the blurry panel of the blonde is a blurred picture of something we see later... Sneaky.

walkingnorth

You say this like I'm organised, but this character still doesn't have a name in my notes, she's just Blonde Elf

David Fenger

I kind of like that. It feels like she doesn't really deserve a name. "You had a crush on someone before me? Who?" "Honestly, she doesn't matter any more. I'd rather forget her." (Sorry, amateur writer. Hard not to put words to ideas.)