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Paul Zagieboylo

"Maybe they like pineapple on pizza." I died.

Paul Zagieboylo

You people are absolute monsters and I don't know how you can live with yourselves :P :P :P In seriousness, I can just see this self-help article. "Maybe you have irreconcilable alignment differences. Maybe they're secretly an axe murderer. Maybe they like pineapple on pizza. You just don't know!"

Skyinou

Back when I was young, there would have been "they have a blog" or something in the list x)

walkingnorth

I read a lot of "help I have a crush on a coworker" articles to put this together, this really is only a tiny bit of an exaggeration XD

Rachel F

Wanted to give you my thoughts upon my re-read: when I first read this chapter, I had thought her moment of realization at the end was an idea of how she could get to know Mira better. (It read to me as a light bulb moment at first read) Re-reading, it's clear it's a reaction to the next suggestion.

walkingnorth

Thank you for sharing that! hmmm, I'm not sure if this bit of confusion is a problem - the experience of reading update-by-update is never going to be the same as binging, and I'm never going to be able to beam the story as I see it into other people's heads, so I think this is okay? As long as Tess's shocked/sad face brings readers back for the next update I think it's fine for readers to gain a different understanding as they read on. Probably. I will mull this over! Thank you again for sharing :)

Rachel F

yeah I think it's fine that I made an incorrect guess, that's how it is with stories, people make predictions that may or may not be accurate. I just wanted to let you know what my first impression as a data point so you'd have the information