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Jonas Richter

Nice! Count me in on the "hand soft" fan club! :-> I'm actually not sure how to read/interpret bits of the first half - specifically, what Tess' unspoken fears ("Oh no... I hope she doesn't mean...") are about. It's clear she's uncomfortable about going back and talking with strangers who make her feel alien and unwelcome. But reading the panels I don't feel certain that's what she is fearing in that second panel. Maybe it's because "of course that's what she meant" can be read either as a confirmation of her earlier fears, or as a correction (but unfortunately still something that Tess doesn't particularly like). Not sure if this is useful feedback - but it's certainly not meant as criticism. I'm enjoying this episode. And I'm looking forward to the photos. It'll be fun to see how they try to actually stage their fake dating. :)

walkingnorth

I'm curious - what else do you think Tess might be thinking about? Do you have anything in mind? Thank you for sharing your thoughts, always appreciated!

Jonas Richter

Nope, I have nothing in mind. For me the link between Tess' unspoken fears and the later explanation just doesn't feel that stringent, so that opens up a little space for wondering: "Is that it, or is there something else I'm missing?"

Escritorian

Tess is so unintentionally smooth. Also, seeing her little thoughts like, "hand soft" is a delight.