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Fletcher

So I realized I assumed when I read 11.1 that I thought Jason and Vera work at the same company as Tess, because they talk about sneaking out and stuff. But I realize that's a big assumption. Do they work with Tess? Is that something you can answer?

Jack Newbill

All of them are neat designs!

walkingnorth

No they don't work with Tess (or together, even). I wonder what I can do to make that clearer in the dialogue... Thanks for bringing this up!

Fletcher

I'm not sure it's necessary that you do make it clearer. Or that you do so on that page. It might just be me trying to sus out lore from every panel. If I venture a guess as to where my mind went as I was initially reading. This is the first time we've encountered any friendly relationship Tess has outside of work.Although it was foreshadowed, I perhaps had a mental construction that Tess' life is both mostly solitary and that all her social relationships are connected to her work. On top of that Harlow working from home was specifically called out, where as the other two just talked generally about sneaking/leaving work early. Hope that helps.

Anonymous

Just to add another 2c, I didn't get the impression that they worked in the same company as Tess myself, so it might be fine to just leave it as is. If you find a way to make it clearer that you like, though, that's never a bad thing. :)

walkingnorth

Thanks for the additional cents/thoughts, I appreciate it! I'll change Jason's dialogue to "left the lab early" which should rule out him working in the same office as Tess. I'll admit I haven't thought all that much about where any of them work, other than that they all do something maths-adjacent, and a lab works just as well for that as an office.