ep 60 script (Patreon)

My original plan for this episode was for 2-3 panels of Austen saying goodbye to Sunati, then to focus the episode on Sunati arriving home, with the episode ending with an outside force impacting on her life that eventually leads to conflict.

But as I started writing the script I realised that I was pushing through to the plot very quickly and I needed to spend more time on Sunati's emotions, because she has emotions and they're important. It took me a bit of time to settle into how the "I love you" was going to play out, because I wasn't expecting it to happen now.

(Next episode's script-to-thumbnail process is similarly all over the place, because every time I'd thought about this arc I'd jumped straight to the conflict and hadn't thought at all about what happens before then. )