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revised page (Patreon)

Published:
2024-11-16 05:52:00
Imported:
2026-06
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i did major and several changes to this page, like changing the format from letter size to a4 to fit with the other page i did, added shadows, fixed the framing, moved the d to have more appearance and to not make the page unbalanced and highlight more the cum effect

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HitsuBT

Horny shit aside, this is so fucking excellent. Love your action lines. Glad to see you playing with the placement of the "props" within the scene too lol. It definitely reads a bit better (the first version was just as well but this does breath a little bit more clarity in object placement). There's a lot going on in this but it doesn't get too visually busy (lol Yasushiro Nightow's action depictions bahaha). Excellent work man!

HitsuBT

(Manga artist for Trigun, I love his work it's really cool but his action scenes are notoriously "busy" and sometimes his figures can get lost in the motion blur that he depicts). Saying yours is just right, definitely intense action happening but not overly so to the point of losing the art within the effects!