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Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 5-8 (pencils) (Patreon)

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2020-12-12 22:00:01
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2026-06
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Pages 1-4 Pencils

Pages 1-4 Finished

These are pages 5-8, pencils:

Gotta say a lot of this I want to rework as I go. Some of these faces are wonky and that final close up... I'm not so sure. I want to show some balls all clenched up but that's tough to show! I might tweak it all over the next few days before I dive into inks - so let me know if anything looks especially weirdsies. There's a part of me that's daunted by the success of the first 4 pages - that starting here again at the pencils stage, just feels scary ha.

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Tigerchris

Oh my I can't wait to see this in color...hehrhe though those sheets they look...intact XD

Kadath

Page 6, bottom left panel: Judy died doing what she loved most XD

ocaron

looks good sofar, the only quirk i see is the changing angles, especially with nick moving to the bag, from the other cells it feels like he is on the wrong side, love the maw shot and the chomp, not sure what the wap in the first panel is from but amuses me thinking its Owen's tail wapping Nick in the nose

Amadose

That's it exactly! I wanted Nick in the scene a bit so I've got Owen giving him a lil Wap with his tail. See what you mean about Nick floating about around a bit. Not sure if I'll remedy that or not...

ocaron

I dont think it is worth fixing as it would throw the balance of the page off if you reversed their position and with out some way of marking that the pov has changed it would be hard to shift view and the quirk is far from jarring

Rickochet

Oooo, that maw shot addition and bite are wonderful. Good to see the “predator/prey” angle getting some play. Definitely love how Owens character is taking spotlight in the scene. I think it’s looking very nice.

AngelOD

Mmmnf! Fuck.. This is soooo hot! ❤

Mikey

Really love the angles here. The last bit from Nick about having a turn and getting denied is a wonderful touch. Kind of brings you back to the reality that this really isn't a threesome, this is cuckolding. That sudden bubble burst makes it all the more hot.

Tay

Ohh this is so great! I loved how you now made Owen pretty buff, look at the size of his arms compared to Nick! He is the real big Bull! hahaha can’t wait to see him using all his size and strength to humiliate Nick (maybe an arm wrestle in the future? lol) I’m loving how this is turning out! Also that toy, Owen is pretty big I think he left it too stretched to Nick to use it properly hahahaha thanks for this great comic :)

jim

I wonder how nick feels watching Owen bite Judy? Seeing another fox mark her in that way. Great work I look forward to more.

Amadose

yeah! I wanted to give it a slightly sinister/topping moment =D Glad it works!

Amadose

Right? A small little reminder like that is so dang hot.

Amadose

Haha, I really want the toy to seem like it's on its last legs - I'm too mean ha. Really glad the muscles work for you too! I tried to focus on just making his arms more angular and toned - I think it worked!

Amadose

Oof yeah. That's gotta be hard/amazing to see.

Fen Redwolf

Amazing work. Everything about this is perfect. The sex scenes themselves, the pred-prey play, those big ass balls and how Nick looks, especially in the first panel, ready to dig in.... mmmfh <3<3<3 The only sloppy seconds that adorable little cucky should get are the creampies for dinner <3

sms

It just looks amazing! I can't wait to see the hardcore chapter of this comics!

Tay

It’s great XD can’t wait to see him standing next to Nick so we can see more of him