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EDIT - updated the last page to have more Nick text, to make it clear he's been a good boy, and done as he's been told (blown his load into the toy) ;D 

Aw yeah, two more pages DONE! (and a typo on an earlier page fixed!)

Pretty pleased with how this came out! I hope you like them, friends!

I'll attach all the finished pages for the chapter too!

Hopefully in the next few days, I'll have you all some 'single panels' of these pages, and then I'll start work on the pencils for the last four pages for the chapter! I'm pretty nervous tbh; penciling is always the hardest step for me.

If you are here for JUST finished pages - this is your heads up that you can bail from the Patreon for a few months! It usually takes me a while to get the pages done, so feel free to disappear for a while (guilt-free), and drop back in later down the road (make use of Patreons 'Follow' button!)

I'll be thinking a bit on the QnA chapter script too. So if your a higher tier Patreon, feel free to hit me up with any questions to make use of. 

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The refined flats of these pages.

Basic flats of these pages!

Inks of these pages!

Pencils (and text) of these pagesLayouts/basic script for the chapter

The help-steer-the-ship-Vote is currently happening (for higher tiers), this time we're voting on Nicks-sexuality!

Higher tiers are always invited to send me questions (in private or as a comment) for the in-between-chapter QnA's! But I'm always game to answer questions for any tier outside of the QnA too.

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Andry SilverFang

Oh my goodness! I've been waiting for you for days! ❤️ Good job!! ✨

A Mad Man with a Box

Omg these are amazing... I can't wait to see more of what they get up to. So erotic and sexy af

Amadose

Thanks, Andry! Pretty pleased with how they turned out!

Amadose

Thank you so much bud! Means a whole lot!

Mikey

god this is amazing, I love looking for all the little details I couldn't see before. You put so much work in to this and it shows. Amazing job!

Amadose

Hells bells, thank you Mikey!!! I love knowing you're seeing it all and enjoying it =D

rasswar

can you add jpg links?

Kadath

Such a hot comic :B

Rickochet

Heck yeaaaah. Drinking in all those adorable judy faces in glorious color. Knocking it out of the park.

Amadose

Love it - thank you Rickochet!

Fen Redwolf

Damn I love this! Your art is amazing as per usual! ;D Also enjoying the littel dialogue changes! "You know, having a normal one." Just perfect! <3

Arvetis

Has Nick not cum yet, or does he just not get a panel showing it?

Amadose

Ah he's supposed to be tied and cuming into the toy - I see now that's not exactly clear, after some text changes... Maybe I should change his text to 'Oh you know. Cumming into a toy, regular stuff.'

Amadose

Ha thanks, Fen! I was wondering I should make it clearer in that dialogue that he's tied n cumming into the toy?

Fen Redwolf

Ah, mhm, I liked that line, but it is not as clear for someone, who doesen't know the original. "Oh, you know, tied to an old toy, having a normal one." I have more, but brevity isn't my strong suit, as you might have noticed. :'D

Amadose

Made a change! Had to make the text a smidge small, but I think it gets the point across ;D

Amadose

Made a small update - take a peek! Hopefully, that clears things up a bit more! In hindsight, I should have given Nick the 1st panel of that page, to show HIM cumming. Maybe a close-up of the toy pressed against this balls dripping. Live and learn =)

Retromancer

I really like how you do more refinements in the dialogue as you go along. I like the "just having a normal one" line as is. I love the Ha! after that, and the insatiable wife line, and the Y-yes sir! That one was the best. A nice little signal from Nick to Owen...

AngelOD

Murrrrr! Well, you know I'm not going anywhere. I love that you specify that people can pause while you work on new material, though. Especially as times are tough for so many and they might need to balance their finances against their thirst for high quality cuckolding art. ❤

Amadose

Me too! I love getting to come back to the script, especially after so many monthly votes. It gives me a real 'I want to push this angle a bit more' vibe. The last three pages of text might change the most? I wasn't in love with my first draft. I'm not truely sure what I want Owen and Judys convo to look like. It'll develop as I go =)

Amadose

Oh gosh - absolutely. I hate the idea of anyone sitting here paying month to month just for the finished pages when I know it takes a ton of time and multiple months to do! I see Patreon as a way to engage with you guys and a way for you guys to keep me in the coffees. Support me as much or as little as you all like, no stress =)

AngelOD

Absolutely! But you know that as a massive cuck (who has snuck into another tier to access the voting, shhh) who can afford it, I see it as a sort of duty to pay so that alphas with better things to spend their money on, can pause with a better conscience. 😉❤

Retromancer

Having the text be small has a context all its own

Amadose

Haha I love that =D Cucks supporting Bulls in need. Heart!

Amadose

Feel like a programmer shipping a bug as a feature ;D

Fen Redwolf

Ha! Yes! That works! Sloppy and loose, perfect for our little cuck. <3 Excited for the changes to the next pages, and the threesome snuggling shot! Been looking forward to that one for a long time :D

AngelOD

As it should be. ❤❤

Retromancer

Not really. Maybe an unintended consequence, but it works.

Retromancer

Hmm... something like "I WILL get that knot in you, little bunny" might work. Or something that slightly degrades Nick without going too over the top?

Fen Redwolf

Talking about the fleshlight: O: "It's good tho, right?" N: "Yea, just a bit... uhm... loose." O: "Ha! It would be for you! You'll get used to it. Have to, really."

Tigerchris

WOO INTERNET BACK SO I CAN SEE THE GREAT NESS

Amadose

Re- the snuggling page - ME TOO. This might be the one I pencil last - as I'm the most excited for it =D

Ryo

I love interactions like this. A steady group dynamic with the Bunny still having most of the control. Can’t wait to see where you go from here.

Amadose

Aw thanks Ryo! I'm excited too =D

Retromancer

Oh, that's nice. Something about Jude telling Owen in page14-15 that she gets turned on by how Owen is so dominant towards both her and Nick might open up avenues towards the Bi direction the comic is going in as well as the chastity stuff

Amadose

I mean the chapter is still all their first outing. I sort of think Owen is dictating things at this end point, and Judy is getting swept up in all. I'm not sure! I'll figure it out =)