Chapter 6 - Ties That Bind (Script 50% - SPOILERS) (Patreon)

BIG OL SPOILER WARNING - If you want to avoid reading the script for this next chapter, avoid this post! However, if you like seeing the sausage made; and are curious to read a WIP-script. This is the post for you!I can't express enough how WIP this is; a whole lot of it's gonna change as I go. I accidentally wrote an EPIC, that will take me forrrrever to turn into a comic. It needs cutting down, it needs more 'character' (like quips and snark from Nick), it needs editorial, it needs Patreon input. BUT - tomorrow is a new month and I wanted all of you who are bailing at the end of this month to see where I'm at so far. 

Let me know your thoughts! And that goes double for the higher tiers; I want to have your input! Is Owen too mean? Is he not mean enough? Is Nick too soft? Does it work does it not? Bi enough, not bi enough?

The basic summary of the chapter is that it's an 'escalation', I felt like we need a conversation between Owen and Nick to semi-naturally ramp things up! Their 'check in and scale things up' convo. The next chapter should hopefully be a 'chastity cage' one, and the one after that a 'Judy contending with Jelousy' chapter. For those to land, we need this chapter where we solidify the kink in their lives and step things up!

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Reminder; it's a WIP and not done!

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We see an open door and a dark room. This is Owen's apartment (jointly shared with another who isn't here this night)

We hear sex noises coming from the open door, as we see a tops-no-bottoms Nick sporting a hard-on (or an untouched semi?), open the fridge. Maybe we're just seeing his lower half. In the background:

J - Oh fuck oh fuck. It's so much... it's - I don't think I can take any more.

O - Mmmfph. Just breathe let it set in. That's it. Here goes-

J- Oh fuck oh fuck oh ---!

O - !!!!

Judy starts to cum, and maybe so does Owen. Maybe with a howl or a squeak?

We're still with Nick in the kitchen, as he retrieves two beers. 

There's a moment of silence from the bedroom, and Nick perks his ears up in curiosity at the silence.

From the room; 

O desperately - ...Ah?

... NICK! Help!?!

We see a panicky N spring toward the door, bottle caps flitting in the air behind him with a 'Fwip!'

Nick enters the room and so does the camera. We now get to see the full picture. Judy is atop of Owen, twitching and trembling, maybe her leg is doing that rabbit-thumping action. Owen's knot is deep in her, he's got a 'what's happening' face of surprise.

O frantically - Nick! I just... we tied... and she's gone all...

If we have space: we show Nicks expression go from '!!!!' to 'relaxxxed'

Nick leans in looking at the tie, he's not frantic anymore, instead, he's a bit sly looking, Judy's all quivering and out of it.

N-  Oh no. This is Bad.

O - !!! Wha-Really?!?! 

Nick shrugging or maybe looking at Owen with concern, beers still in hand. 

N - Yup. You've broken her. She's broken.

O - ?!? Nick - What do we do? I didn’t mean to!? It's our first- and-

We see Nick looking down at Owen with a big ol teasing grin. Maybe tongue cheekily sticking out.

Owen catches on. His face sobers up a bit. Or Judy moans/purrs in happiness and it breaks the moment.

O - Right. Yep. You're pulling my leg. Of course.

N breaks out in a grin at the :/ looking Owen.

N - Haha. I'm sorry! I couldn't help it! Just fun seeing YOU wriggle for a change.

O comedically - Asshole. So, she's all right?

N - Yup. It's something that happens sometimes when she cums -super-duper-hard-. Doesn't happen to me so much anymore. But freaked me out the first time too, till she woke up and wanted to do it again. And again. And again. You know; -rabbits.-

A close-up of the tie.

N - Guessing that tie of yours is something else. 

O - Grunt - Yeah, no kidding - reeeeeal tight in here. <3 ... 

O with a grin - Been a while right? Since you last tied?

N - Ah... 

O - Must be killing you that it's me, and not you in here. 

N sits down in a chair (with a view of the bed)

N with a sheepish grin - ha, yeah.

We have a pause, maybe the camera rests on Owen's balls and we see them moving/ tightening and flexing.

O - Look at us, bud! Finally made the tie happen! Here I am, filling -you're- wife up with all this cum, and not a drop of it yours. Another line crossed right?! What a life! <3

O - You a happy cuck? This still doing it for you? 

N looking down - Ah! Oh... 

Yeah. Yeah, it is.... But-

N looks at his hard (untouched?) cock - Honestly?-

N looks up just a smidgen or to the side (not making eye contact) - I have been thinking about... asking you to step things up a bit.

O looking pleased as punch - Oh Nick!!! Haha! I was worried for a second... 

But - you're feeling ready to go a little harder huh? Can't say I'm surprised; things have been getting a little -comfortable-. It's about time we tightened those screws. You spoken with the little lady about this?

N nervously - ha, yeah. She's been bugging me to talk to you for a while. I'm not sure why I've felt so gun-shy about it.

O - Aw, it's a big deal. I'm glad you spoke up. This, you, me, and Judy? It only works as long as we're talking. So...

I want to hear you say it.

N - ...?

O - Tell me specifically how you want me to fuck you up, Nick.

N - urp!!

Nick shrinks and fidgets for a second.

Looking away, and in a soft voice Nick starts

N - You mentioned before, about...humiliation stuff, Denial, and Chastity. I know we've only been touching on those things, but, I want to ... try them more. They... excited me. 

I think you could be... meaner. More entitled. I see it in you - you pull your punches and... and I don't want you to have to do that. You're our Alpha. I can take it. I want it. I want- strike that- Judy and I, want all of you. Your kind heart and... your darker side too. 

N a little louder and emboldened -

I'll speak up. I'll tell you if it's too much. I'll trust you if you trust -me- to say stop when I need to. But I want us three to go there. And, and...

N with a small embarrassed grin, maybe finally making eye contact with camera/Owen - I want you to fuck me up, Owen.

There's a pause. Owen is both shocked and beaming. He's genuinely taken aback.

N speaks up to break the silence - I mean we don't need to change anything major or-

O - You're not allowed to cum in your wife -ever again-.

N - Urp!!!

O - I'll think up some other stuff too - don't you worry. But, for right now; that little 'condom' rule we had? It's now permanent. More than that, Ties; ain't for you either bud. An Alpha shouldn't have to share -his girl- and it's time you caught on. 

N - Ah- j-just like that?!?!

O - -Just like that.- The last time you two tied is now the -last time- you two tied. 

N poofing a bit with excited/scared energy.

N - haha ha I- I...

N - ...that's kinda a big deal?!

O - Ha, not for me it isn't. 

N shrinking a bit, he's a bit off balance and ill-prepared for this, but Owen continues. With a low growl. We see Owen spreading Judy's cheeks as he talks.

O - You want me to step things up? Fine, good, I'm more than fucking ready. So it's time you got it in your head. This cunt? Doesn't belong to you anymore. It hasn't -for a while-. All I'm doing is making it official with a rule or two.

Car in the headlights Nick over the course of a few frames getting more and more frazzled.

O - A good hard fuck, mind-blowing sex, earth-shattering orgasms? These aren't for you anymore. You're a footnote. Our supporting act. There to get; Cucked.

You don't tie. You wear condoms. And more than that you'll know your place in this pack. when she's wet, you encourage her to fuck me. You're her second choice. Understand?

The room is still and quiet. 

O - Understand?

N - I- I- Yes.

O - Good. Good boy! Proud of you. Now. I think I'm due some thanks for treating you to so many new rules. Don't you?

N looks shrunken but still hard - I... I - mean. T-thank yo-

O - No, no. 

You can do better. 

O spreads his legs wide - 

I saw the QnA, I'm betting you'd like this as much as I would - but - I don't want to force you into anything you don't want to do. I won't judge if you safe-word out of it. So tell me you're not curious, tell me I'm wrong. 

...Or be a good pup and crawl that maw of yours over here and thank me properly with that tongue of yours.

The camera sit's on Nicks's face, a complex of emotions. Maybe the camera keeps closing in.

O - I love you bud. I'll never cut you out. But you're right, I've been holding back. I want to push and stretch you. 

We see Nick cautiously crawl forward

O - And right now, I want you here. Between my legs, paying me lip service, while I mate you're wife. Thanking me for treating you like the cuck you are.

We see Nick's snoot get closer.

O - ...

Nicks tongue tentatively reaches out and touches balls.

That's it. Good boy.

Cut to a final page or two?:

Judy stirring awake, atop of Owen

J - Mmmph, heck, I must have blipped out for a sec

O - Chuckle. Just for a few minutes. How you feeling small thing?

J - Full. Fuck. So full, and - gods that feels good. What is-

Nick!?!?

We see his tongue on her ass and licking up the seam between O and J's mating

O - Haw! Don't mind him. He's been busy cleaning up a few of our leaks.

J looking back at him in a flush.

J - Oh, wow.

She runs a hand down through his ear/hair, maybe eliciting a happy growl from Nick?

J - You look really good down there honey.

She turns around back to Owen and gives him a peck/rests her head on his chest in contentment.

J - I guess I missed out on a few things huh?

O - Don't worry, I'll fill you in.

J - Mmmm <3

End of script!?